My Unwanted Heart

I'm standing here all alone
In the midst of a thousand faces I barely knew
Holding my crumpled heart in my bleeding hand
Waiting for the pain to let go.

On those thousand half-hearts
I couldn't find my other half
I cannot fit the other part
I'm so unwanted, I'm so unloved.

I fall down on my knees and cry
Begging anyone to share my pain
But no one desires to love
My unwanted heart again.

© 2013 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, a heart as beautiful as yours will always find it's other half. Your writing is as heart wrenching and beautiful as always, and the image says it all. well done.

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ChitrangadaSharan 3 years ago from New Delhi, India

Beautiful poem, but I am sure your heart is the most desirable one. And you would definitely find someone, whose heart is as golden as yours.

Beautiful and touching!

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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

I can feel the yearning. Beautiful work.

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

So much pain and yearning to be loved. You have painted the picture well with your vivid words. Sad one here. Such a beautiful heart and your heart will be desired soon by the one it has been searching for when you least expect it.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper

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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

How sad! I fell the pain and hurt coming from your words. Even thought this is sad, it is beautifully written. My uncle used to say, "There's a lid for every pot." Sometimes it is hard to believe that. Beautiful poem!

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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Emotional and so well conveyed. Great poem.

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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Heartbreaking, beautiful, such expression...

Truly an amazing write. What else can I say?

A flawless piece. 5/5

Voted up

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Hey, Spy. I was just thinking about you and here you are! You poem is so sad. I hope no one has broken your heart; it's so full of love!

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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

wow what an emotionally charged group of words..

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Moms-Secret 3 years ago from Central Florida

I really enjoyed reading this. Genuine connections are rare and often do not look like they would fit in your puzzle until you have seen them up close.

ignugent17 3 years ago

Full of emotion and makes you understand the feelings of others. :-)

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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very sad but so beautifully written. Well done my friend !

Vote up and more !

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HattieMattieMae 3 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

Very sad yes, and beautiful too! :)

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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Certainly feel the emotion behind these words - very well done -

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Well expressed. I, a good looking guy, felt the pain of despair when Arlene left me at 18. Nothing else mattered.

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Movie Master 3 years ago from United Kingdom

Very well expressed - great work, voted up!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Lovely poetry. Emotionally passionate.

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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Very powerful emotional poetry. All the great qualities in great poems. Thank you. Jamie

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The lonliness and despair comes cascading through. A wonderful work of art.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

So You have chosen the correct words of expression here and created such a poem of sadness

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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

unknown spy....beautifully written and this reader can feel your seems this is the way of today's world.... true love, but once in this lifetime is not unusual.... good to see you back....hope this was just a fleeting thought....

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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Spy - I have been working quite a bit of overtime which is why it has taken me some time to respond to this heart touching, insightful, sad yet beautiful write. Yours is one of my favorite styles of writing and I always look forward to what comes next.

Keep up the great work.

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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Wow, really good. Sorry I missed it for so long. Running way behind as always, lol. Oh and love the picture too!


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rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

So beautiful and sad. It's so heart touching. There's always someone who cares about you, we just look in the wrong place I guess. I love this poem. Please take care spy.

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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Wow.. saw your name and wondered why i have not seen your name on my hubs .. then found this wonderful write that I missed .. beautiful ..Love it .

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tnderhrt23 3 years ago

well not, I relate to this piece more than I care to! Emotionally rich writing!

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iharshita 3 years ago from Karnataka, India

Amazing and beautifully written.

Your hubs are so heart melting and we can relate to it.

Brilliant! :)

Voted up !

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fivesenses 3 years ago from new delhi

Sad, profound and well written...shared.

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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

thank you fivesenses.

victor david 3 years ago

hi unknownspy

I am not much into poetry but I know how you feel. Everyday as I ride my way towards home, I also experience the emotions as you expressed in this poem. Having a love not wanted, experiencing the pain of letting go of that love. And the frustration of finding my other half who would fill the emptiness in my heart. ........I can relate to this, you are truly gifted writer...

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