My heart fell a million miles (a Valentine's poem)

Have you ever done that?

Given your heart away, I mean?

I gave my heart away today

To someone I knew well

He looked at me his special way

And then he broke the spell

What?!?!?!
What?!?!?! | Source

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Tis nice you care for me that way

But I’ve someone else in mind

No, don’t go, you can stay

Things might change in time

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I wondered what he meant by that

Was he saying he could care

Don’t worry, love, he said right back

Get between, she wouldn’t dare

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Are you saying you would like us both

I asked in shocked despair

Of course, he said, who else could boast

Of two loves to hold so dear

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My heart fell down a million miles

I lost all sense of time and place

I’d fallen for all his melting smiles

But love for me, he had not a trace

How about a cute stuffed Teddy Bear...
How about a cute stuffed Teddy Bear... | Source

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I’ll suffer from a broken heart

For Valentine’s Day this year

Perhaps I can work towards a new start

Like a cute stuffed Teddy Bear

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At least he won't ask me to share!

© 2012 Cheryl Simonds

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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

If any man ever asks you to do something you don´t want to, Give him the elbow, I say. Love is a two way thing.

Find someone better, although I must admit, as a poem I found it quite funny. Well written


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut Author

thank you for the comment, I was trying to be funny, however, I have and I'm sure others have been treated this way by one, or two. :) PS: I promise to find someone else, but that Teddy Bear looks real cute right about now......:)


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Dee42 4 years ago from Beautiful Arkansas

What a great hub! Loved it. I've been treated that way also, along time ago, it wasn't cool. Voted up for ya.


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut Author

Thank you, Dee42, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I was treated that way a long time ago. Teddy Bears truly are better companions in that case, right? :) thanks for the votes and the comment.


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Sometimes teddies are a much better option :)


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut Author

carter06, how right you are! Thanks for stopping and commenting. :)

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