My spirit's creature


I sit on the rocks under the moonlight

Waiting to see anyone that passes by

I hide in the shadows

I sing a beautiful melody for you

Does my deed go unnoticed

Or will my hopes be seen through

a kind stranger will take my hand

and free my soul from this watery land

My lungs filled with love keep me afloat on this never ending glistening sea

I show myself to you in the day

to see what you will say

you look into my blue eyes

and much to my surprise you began to cry

hearing the sorrow of my song

the beauty of the sorrow going on and on

then you began to sail leaving me for gone

beause I am a siren of the seven seas

there is no way a human and I can be

Only will I have you in my dreams

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Elizabeth99 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

Awesome :)

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you :)

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HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

Very beautiful! :)

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crystolite 5 years ago from Houston TX

So deep and somehow mystical. I like it...cheers.

voted up.

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mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

Hello lady. I can never be let down by your poetry. Your words are beautiful. Great hub.

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you to everybody!!!! :D glad you all enjoyed

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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Only one word needed, beautiful.

Thanks for sharing.

Take care


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chamilj 5 years ago from Sri Lanka

Truly Beautiful! Voted up!

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you! :D

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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Aw, what a beautiful poem, and so amazing. I just love the image of the siren and it is so sad but beautiful also.

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thanks astra!! I always look forward to your comments!

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epigramman 5 years ago

...lovely and heartfelt writing with evocative imagery and words that stir the imagination ........

homework assignment for you: Go to You tube and type in Tim Buckley - Song to the Siren

lake erie time 3:54am with a full moon presently shining

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