My Lucky Night At The Club (limerick)

Was there at a club we did meet

I never saw sight quite so sweet

My heart was a-thrill

I swear world stood still

At fresh dollar bill at my feet

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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

So funny you loved the dollar you found at your feet.

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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

Cha-ching! Love it!

Your limericks are always so much fun.

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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

martin.. you are so funny my friend.. she was so sweet lol


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lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Lol. the dollar bill at your feet... good one!

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Rollin' in clover my friend! :)

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Made 4 years ago from Finland

Great limerick that made me smile! :)

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Wicked sense of humor!

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Now, who dropped the dollar...?

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annart 4 years ago from SW England

Great twist! So much with so few words. Well done! Up etc.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Money is the root of all evil..Hee..Funny.

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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

I am so far behind in my reading but now that I've had my great MH giggle, I can sleep.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Always loved it when I found unexpected money.

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ImKarn23 4 years ago

lol..what is it about finding money? even a dime - it's sooo much fun...haha..

i always give away coins that i find - ya know what they say: find a penny pick it up - pass it on and have good luck!

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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

You did it again, Martin! You have me sitting here chuckling to myself! You're a trip!

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