My Sad Horse Tale (limerick)

With broken leg my horse was found

So with gun my dear friend I downed

Will time ever bury

The pain which I carry

Or my ban from merry-go-round


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Love it! That was a real surprise, and here was I feeling sorry for you and that horse! So funny!


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

A nice twist here Martin.

Graham.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Hilarious twist!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

You turn on the merry-go-round

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