My Tomorrows (poem)

Could I should I free this feeling inside

And what will we say when it drifts your way

Will you take my heart and cast it away

Or will my tomorrows open up wide

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Should I could I trust chance not to stray

And let you decide the fate of my pride

Will you be the cause I shrivel and hide

Or will my tomorrows glow from today

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Why is it a smile has done this to me

I who met dangers much stranger than this

I who enjoyed nights that others dream of

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Could I should I leave this to destiny

And one little kiss perhaps she’ll dismiss

Or will my tomorrows be filled with love

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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

M, beautiful poem and a great singer - an unbeatable combination! Voted up.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Beautiful, powerful, and excellent poem. I have to echo Ann's comment. I love the combination of movie and poetry! Again, incredible job, keep it up!


Janhorner 4 years ago

Really like this; wondering what tomorrow will bring.

Lovely, enjoyed reading.

Jan


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AliceFSpencer 4 years ago from Texas

My tomorrow turned into 10 yrs of love this makes me smile great poem!


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

Awesome poem.

Tomorrow will bring every success.


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Gottabegod 4 years ago from Southern USA

Lovely poem Mhatter!! Some risks are worth taking!

God bless!


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dinkan53 4 years ago from India

Great writings, many useful things can be done in a day if you don't always make that day tomorrow. Rated as awesome.


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Pamela-anne 4 years ago from Kitchener, Ontario

Wonderful poem well written but I believe the saying " it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved before" thanks for sharing keep them coming! take care pam.


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Mhatter, I liked this very much - the video really complement the poetry and I like the apprehensive start to every stanza - 'could I, should I....', it showed a kind of youthful vulnerability. Really enjoyed it.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Truly wonderful, as per usual. You are a great poet.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

So beautiful. I'm listening to Frank as i write. He was my sisters love, I am just now finding what a great singer he was. Should I could I , is a wonderful expression we all ask.. thank you..


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

You did well with that poem.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Frankie's singing, and I'm writing, and reading. Great hub, my new chill out page. Thanks Mhatter, you nailed it again!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

So lovely and Frank Sinatra makes it just perfect.

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