"Mystery Unraveled"

A continuation of "Mystery Unsolved"

Then,
   there you were.
      This mystery unravelled.
   Right before my eyes,
there you stood.
   And all those butterflies,
      went wild,
   inside my stomach,
they flew.
All these years,
   searching,
I can't believe,
  I've finally found you.

But you haven't aged a day.
You looked exactly the same.
    Those blue eyes stared back at me,
        this time I was sure.
    My heart, so excited, yet scared,
trembled, fell to the floor.
I could not breathe.
    I could not move.
And then I felt your arms around me.
   For the first time,
I felt your love, 
   so pure.

You lifted me,
    and took me away.
Off the ground
    we did soar.
"How could this possibly be?"
    You answered,
"Well, I'm an angel of course."

"All those years was a test,
    to see if your love was true,
        to see how long you would wait,
    to see if this life was meant for you.
And now the time has come,
    You are my true love."

I had become ill 
    in the last few years,
         They said I had just a
    short time to live.
       and I died that day,
   only to be awakened
by him.


© Copyright NMJ 2011
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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

You glimpse beyond simple perception is one of beauty,Nikki.;)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thank you acer. and yours is one of perplexity.


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Oh, that surprised me, sad but beautiful:-

"I had become ill

in the last few years,

They said I had just a

short time to live.

and I died that day,

only to be awakened

by him."

Lovely poem :-)


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

A romantic poem, written to draw the readers in and imagine a fantasy of their own discretion, interesting read, Nikki.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thanks bumspy. glad you liked this. to love an angel is a blessing and a curse. you have to go through all life waiting for that perfect love and in your dying day he saves you. and you live happily ever after in peace with your true love angel. and become an angel yourself. if you can not wait, or never feel that connection with a total stranger like she did, and fall in love with someone else then you do not become an angel when you die. thats the story here.


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LuisEGonzalez 5 years ago from Miami, Florida

Nice hub, thanks for sharing it with the rest of us.


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

Hey, i read the story, damn, felt a cold shoulder here, lol, but seriously i like your style, your imagination maybe greater than mine.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thank you for reading luise hope to see more of you. and spade always my gratitude to you. its a given. not greater just different. i see your back to pics that arent you.. I changed mine to a less cheesy smile. like?


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

Nikki, of course i like the pic, actually i like all the pics as long as you are in them and i do like your new pic, letting your hair down is a bonus, as far as me going back to pics not me, i just prefer using the crow as my avatar seems cool, lol, what do you think, should i use my real pic?


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

i like the crow but its up to you. whichever you feel more comfortable using. I want people to see the person behind my writing though. id rather use my real pic. but the crow is cool and suits your kind of writing and you like masks so its all good. the crow is kinda like your mask.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Great words and simply loved the pictures too.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thank u acaetna!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Its been to long without, the hours without my dearest Nikki, and now I return to find a beautiful new picture, and the most profound of her writing, for which to think deeply...

I loved this series, my friend. So very touching. I can see their faces, the two loves that don't quite connect. Were they meant to connect, to be one? In another life, perhaps?

Life is like that. Moments, tiny fragments of lives we might have lived. You look into someones eyes, and for a precious moment, you trust in dreams, and then, the next moment, you're both a thousand miles away peering out a window, thinking...

And then in the end, at the end, having trusted, we can be saved by our one special angel that we trusted so deeply in. But we can never die. Our dreams, our deep selves, our words, our love, have no end.

We are, you are, the angels of our dreams, and even now, you, my dear best friend, help us to fly...forever!!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

but they did connect, a very strong connection at that, with just one look upon the other she waited her whole lifetime just to see him again. a complete stranger yes, but a connection nonetheless and he was her angel, her true love, and he saved her.


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

yes, and quite wonderfully...


Fay Paxton 5 years ago

Nikki, you never disappoint. You have amazing talent.

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

Aww thank you so much fay!


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

i'm hoping i get on that mystery train that takes you to all the strangest places too and find someone to ride it with. great poem. good job!


JadedLove 5 years ago

"I could not breathe.

I could not move.

And then I felt your arms around me.

For the first time,

I felt your love,

so pure."

i loved this a lot. felt almost angelic. Great to find you again. blessed be.

Johnny Love


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

Oh Nikki this one gave me chills, simply beautiful in every way


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thanks nighthag!!! hope u read from the beginning.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Loved the happy ending. It's amazing how love lifts us up. Oh I missed 'Crime'


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

hehe yep he was just her guardian angel, true love, you should go back and read it, its the first one that started this trio. my favorite actually.

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