Naked and Free

 These are the times that i wait for

When all is quiet,

and the mess has cleared

You and i, naked and free

You wrap your arms around me,

and i just breathe out

feeling safe

feeling strong

feeling overtaken.

No distractions

No hesitations

Just you an I...Naked and free.

So precious these moments

For who knows when something will come between us.

 

Last night i cried after.

I wasnt upset

I was completely overwhelmed

With feelings of love for you.

Its silly after all of these years

That i almost feel like i have a crush on you.

So handsome

So clean

So attentive and careing.

I touched love last night.

And can still smell it on my skin

<3

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lilibees 5 years ago

lovely poem!


Pachuca213 5 years ago

That was so beautiful and the painting is breathtaking. Love is a wonderful thing and to be able to express that so freely is a gift. Great poem!


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Karen Wodke 5 years ago from Midwest

this is an amazing poem. you work the words like magic, and capture the compelling rush and irresistible allure of love.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...that is exactly how you make me feel when I read your work - naked and free - until of course my neighbor phones the cops and tells them that some crazy guy next door is dancing with his laptop in the buff!!!!!


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

awe, thanks guys. I just...after feeling so helpless, and then being able to let go and feel overtaken, it was nice. It was a relief. I had to write about it.

haha, and epigramman, i laughed myself to tears when i saw your comment, lol.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Awesome, loved it.


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FCEtier 5 years ago from Cold Mountain

Clear and precise. Efficient and economical use of words. You've given us readers a great experience.


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

oooOOOooo, so good. Missed your honest words for these last few months. Thanks for visiting during my absence.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

thanx slingobay :)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

This was very sweet! Loved the art work chosen for it

Smiles :)

bellawritter23


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Hmrjmr1 5 years ago from Georgia, USA

absolutely great! I am a fan!


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sam3m 5 years ago from New York

ok, i'm hooked. beautiful artwork. i'm old but i still remember. thanks again


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Fiddleman 5 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

Tremendous read, very nice


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

sam3m- your never too old to feel that free, and besides, you dont look that old to me anyway! :)

Its quite a compliment to see that you read 3 of my poems, after saying you seldom read poetry. I look at my writing, and i dont think that its much different from others that i have seen, or even in the ranks of my fellow hubbers. I must be doing something right though, if all of you continue to read, and to compliment me.


not white trash 5 years ago

what a wonderful rare find. i came here on your advice of scathing remarks towards your mother in law for a bit of light reading and find this romantic gem. Makes me remember I do love my husband and he can be loving.


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dwaynehood 5 years ago from 9535 Stoney Ridge Lane, JENKINTOWN, PA-19046,USA

I think i can't read before a blog like these...


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Edoka Writes 5 years ago

Sweet, sensual and personable. I love it.


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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Hey Pink, you seem to be touching on strong creative feelings and it's making your writing more sensual. Not that I'm complaining, because I would never complain about sensuality. It's one of the most alluring traits women have to offer. Keep up the great work. :) Thumbs up! :)


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

I try to express it as often as i can. After 70, its not really all that sexy, so im getting all i can out of my youth, and sensual sexual desires play a big part!!!


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

pink,

nothing naked is free... there is always a price understood , implied or obvious...

nifty piece though....

th


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Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

naked and free..... nothing like it. Skinny dipping is always more experiential even alone naked....LOL

You get a standing applause. *wink*


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

ha, i went skinny dipping once. i had just gotten thin enough to wear my first ever bikini. i took my tpo off but never the bottoms!


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Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

only once - everyone should make skinny dipping an anual event. Bottoms off too!


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Nah, no bottoms off for me when it comes to being in front of more than one person. My blossom is a precious gift that is only given on my terms, and my terms do not include a studio audience. :)


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Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

LOL - you don't know what you are missing


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

No Neil, i believe if it is me keeping my bottoms on, you dont know what YOUR missing. lmao!


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Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

LOL ---


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

A lovely poetry treat here. Loved this to the last drop. You are a really great writer. Laughing at these comments too. :)


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Dreamsays 5 years ago

Great personality mixed with lovely words. Great hub!

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