Naked

Naked,
Alone and afraid.
My heart well aware of
The price I have paid.

Deserted,
Abandoned in haste.
My soul is so weary
Of lives laid to waste.

Warriors,
With hearts hard but true.
Survivors the victims,
The victims too few.

Attack!
The screams are so loud!
How can they say
That we should be proud?

Death,
Dishonor the damned.
The law of the jungle;
The madness of Man.

Naked,
Alone and afraid.
Our hearts well aware of
The price we have paid.

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No_Clue 5 years ago

Dramatic, vivid poetry! This verse struck hard...

"Death,

Dishonor the damned.

The law of the jungle;

The madness of Man."

Powerful poetry!


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PR Morgan 5 years ago from Sarasota Florida

powerful!


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ahorseback 5 years ago

You are quite a writer my dear .....


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Taleb80 5 years ago

Great poetry

No more law of the jungle.

No more wars, just to sell more weapons.

We are human being.

Even the jungle feels shame towards us.

Yes, we can live together safely.

I believe this.


Smith N. Wesson 5 years ago

Admittedly not what I was hoping for given the title but amazing never the less! Why is so much excellent poetry scored so consistently low on this site?


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Very hard hitting & interesting!


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LauraD093 3 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

This hub (piece) was awesome your accompanying photos are also very impacting . I agree with No Clue the verse they mentioned says it all.

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