Narcotic You

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Narcotic You

By Tony DeLorger ©2011


Each touch a tremor,

each glance a gasping breath,

lips touch with deep passion,

bodies alive with electricity,

and still it is never enough, unquenchable,

my vat always filled but never full.

Subsiding.

Still, resting in perfect tranquillity,

and then a passing touch ignites,

waves build, the swell of wanting flesh entwines,

and the tremors begin,

the sway of emotions descend into reality

and escape the mind, bodies in control.

One kiss, one caress,

and lost we become in each other’s eyes,

souls grasping for completion,

bodies writhing in the pain of expectation,

until the swell recedes.

Subsiding.

Still, resting in perfect harmony,

and then lips brush

and bodies once again ignite,

waves build and lost once again,

we vow sleep,

a desperate attempt

to resist the irresistible.

Hands locked underneath,

‘Are you tired yet?’

It’s 2.40am.

Not a minute to lose,

one touch,

and the tremors begin.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks so much asma, Mamadrama and Dimitri, glad you all connected. Thanks for you comments.


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DimitriLive 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Hotttt, Hottt, Hottttt!!!! Love it! Such Passion. Good Work--so real.


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

Beautiful.. you can feel the passion. I can relate to this. It is wonderful to be lost in passion lke this! Voted up and beautiful!


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

beautiful poem keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep it up!


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks thoughts220, glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.


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thoughts220 5 years ago from India

Remarkable. Overflowing with passion and sensuality as the pleasure seeks a circular road for the lovers. Voted up and interesting.

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