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Good Morning Sunshine
Good Morning Sunshine

Oh Beautiful Morning! Here comes the sun! Its warmth attracting mind and heart to run.

Leading thoughts to ponder events of the week, while clouds made minds wander, seclusion to seek.

What have I done these past few days, while clouds made ones thoughts run away.

I sweep away gloom of things not befitting. Making more room for creative glinting.

Take out my pen, put into prose. Creating more beauty. Most beautiful rose!

Look at plans made. Make proper revisions. The new light engaging much better decisions.

Shift the minds view from self to others. As the clouds did skew the internal mirrors.

Soak up the sun! Just be with the light! Ridding the gloom, It's power takes flight

Kari Shinal Copyright Oct. 15, 1013

© 2013 Kari Shinal

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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

The Sun works wonders does it not? Happy to have brought you a ray or two Gypsy!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. You made me smile just reading and imagining that wonderful sun. We have had pretty rainy autumn days here in Latvia recently. Thanks for the sun.


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

I bet it was an Awesome sight Martin. Thanks for the read!


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Mhatter99 2 years ago from San Francisco

You should have seen the sunrise over SF from my 33rd floor office. Beautiful. thank you


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Thanks Poetic!


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PoeticPhilosophy 2 years ago from Canada

Beautiful poem Tuatha! Loved it.


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Thanks for the Read Mark!


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markdarmafall 2 years ago from Moundsville,WV

take out my pen, put into prose. creating more beauty, most beautiful rose-very powerful words. wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Most Welcome Jamie!


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

And sunshine back at you too! Thank you for the great poem. Jamie


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Thank You Kim! Lots Of Sunshine Right Back To You!


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ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

My favorite kind of morning so brightly presented-nice job

Wishing you lots of sunshine,

Kim


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Some days those clouds have the most profound effect on anyone's outlook. Glad to know the sun has similar effects on everyone. Thanks Larry!


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Tuatha 2 years ago from Fayetteville, NC Author

Thank You James! Have a Beautiful Day!


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Larry Burnes 2 years ago

Exposing my mind to the morning's light lately has provided me with the most unexpected view. I don't recognize what I see and that is a gift.


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James-wolve 2 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful and well-written.Voted up!

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