Love poem, night love, blissful love

Love Poem

Hear a whisper

See a light

Be still, be bright

All is quiet

All is blissful

All is right

Enjoy the soft whisper of the night

Glance at the stars tonight

See the blink of light

Whisper, kiss and wish with all your might


Live to the fullest

Cry and cry and sigh and sigh

See all that you can see

Live, laugh, love and lead


Breathe in deep

Clean your soul

Mindless wonder to lustful sight

Continue to ponder and seek

Love and lust, one to weep one to keep

Cleanse and stand


Look up to the light

Know that night is a whisper

Know that tonight all will be alright

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msorensson 7 years ago

It is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Thank you Melinda, truly, it's my first poem and I am glad you like it. Means the whole to me.


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wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

This poem speaks volumes to me. I understand every bit of it. Thank you so much.


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Wesleycox, thank you for reading and expressing what it meant, it means so much to me.

BC, I am humble and grateful for your comment, since it is my first poem ever in my life. I know it's basic poetry but it does encourage me to do better. Yep, I like to change my profile pics probably to much :)

Thank you all for the encouragement, very pleased.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

keep going, can't believe that is your first...... well done


ralwus 7 years ago

Well it's a good step in poetry then. I enjoyed it and I think I know a little about poetry.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

Very nice poem!


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Brenda and Ralwus, thank you so much, my ego is going crazy and I am lovin' it! I can't say it enough, thank you!


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gusripper 7 years ago

Try to sing it,i think its a beautifull balad


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Gusripper, I think you might me right :)


Ghost32 7 years ago

Ladybird, I'm having trouble finding the right words to Comment correctly on this one, because (to me, anyway) this poem is actually incredibly (and successfully) complex. It's like one of those songs you hear on the radio. You like it a lot, it sounds easy to sing--but it's not.

Their are layers of emotion in this piece, each separate yet all blended together like the ingredients of a well baked cake.

Please do keep on writing. My first "great" poem was written when I was thirteen, but the next in that category didn't pop out of my pen until I'd turned forty-four. You can beat that record without a doubt! :D


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fortunerep 7 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful poem.

dori


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Ghost, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your comment. I am experimenting now with poems, this being my first, so the response you have given me is overwhelming yet encouraging, thank you so very, very much.


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Ladybird33 7 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Forturerep, you have great poems, thank you for reading and responding to me, it means the world!@


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Sage Williams 6 years ago

"Know that the night is a Whisper." How beautiful. Whisper is such a beautiful word. Have always loved it. So much that I named my cat, Whisper.

Nice poem,

Sage


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Ladybird33 6 years ago from Georgia USA Author

Sage Williams, this was the first poem I ever wrote, thank you so much for reading it! Plus, I love the name of your cat :)

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