Night of Friday Blaze


She wears halter top, on a night of Friday blaze

Up on the porch, under the moonlit evening

The stars are flickering, I see the lights in bokeh

I’m coming closer

But love to relish the moment - her standing there

Her dark hair dancing in the wind, kissing her shoulders,

later my skin…


I lost a breath, when she turned around

She could smell my perfume

And she waits no more


She wears halter top, but I’m wearing her now

Up on the porch, under the moonlit evening

The clock stopped ticking, I could feel us in duvet

I’m coming closer

But love to relish the moment - me standing there

My dark hair untangles in the wind, touching her face,

Kissing her skin…


She lost a breath, when I cried a sigh

I could smell her perfume

And it lingers on mine


She wears halter top, on a night of Friday blaze



Dedicated to my poetess, Cathy Nerujen <3

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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Fehl, this is totally beautiful. I am speechless... You are just amazing to me .... I love this so much...

I love you so much. Mwaaaaaah.


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shomaabhyankar 5 years ago from India

beautiful poem and it so vividly paints a picture in mind.


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

An intimate expression that I felt palpable Fehl.;)


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KryptoGirl 5 years ago from Redding

This made me hott not gonna lie but the way you write it drags you in love it!!!!!!!!!!!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Happy you love it, babe. You inspire me so much. I love it when you’re speechless like that :) Mwaahh! Love you, too.

Hi Shomaabhyankar! Interesting username. Thank you for the lovely comment and for reading. :)

Hello Prof. A! Thank you. I love your messages in my hubs :) You’re awesome!

Hi Ashh! Oh my yeah..I’m blazing these days lol It’s amazing to know it drags the readers in :) Thanks muchness!


Shoma Abhyankar 5 years ago

well, my name is shoma and abhyankar is my surname post marriage.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Pretty name and pretty website. :) Hope you read my other poems and creative writings. Bless ya Shoma!


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

What Astra said - Mwaaaaaah.


shoma 5 years ago

you read my posts? thanks.i have started following your other works too


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is like a vignette from a movie, Fehl. You'll have to tell me what bokeh is, I don't know that word or place. Poetry made with love...there is no better kind of poetry, in my opinion. :)

And since I know who this is for, I am smiling times two! :D And is there some parallel with her most recent poem she wrote...echoes of perfume in this too? This is sexy! So kinky! Love your writing, Fehl! It's always a revelation. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

entrancing!! and lovely! A night of Friday Blaze is sure to set ones heart on fire.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I want a night of blaze every night...heh.... ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Ok mwaaah Mik! :)

Shoma hey! Yup, I read a few. Will be reading more soon. You write so well. Keep ‘em coming. :) Do you have Hubpages account?

Hi Peach Muff! Wow thanks that’s a great compliment. Hmm Bokeh (according to me) is the magical effect of a blurred part of a photo or a painting or just any picture when you focus on a thing. It’s that pretty effect of lights resulted from a focus shot or a focus look..take that photo from my hub as an example, the lights behind the girl are in bokeh effect. Damn I love that pic! When I look at it, the girl is like moving and coming closer to me. ;D And yea this is for her (smiling like crazy now) Yup, call this as a bokeh of her latest poem. :) She fires me up to write and more…This is kind of a song and I wish I had that talent to strum a guitar or something to make it a real one. But then I strum something else LOL Kinky? Glad you loved this. :) XO

Entrancing and lovely, I love those! Thanks Heartyfly! So glad to receive amazing comments from an amazing writer like you. :)

Hi, babylove! mmMmhhh… ^,^


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Wow - Mama Mia!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

LOL Acaetnna you always amaze me! :)


Shoma Abhyankar 5 years ago

i am relatively new to hub pages yet.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm just 2 years old here LOL This is a cool place. Shoma, you should join :) Your amazing writings can be read by fellow poets and writers ;) Everything is easy, the Learning Center will guide you.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

I AM REALLY A FAN OF POETRY AND IF ITS LIKE THIS, ROMANTIC I JUST FALL AGAIN TO MY LOVE...GREAT POEM BUDDY


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Poetry is a special piece of my heart.. without it, I'm not me. Thanks so much for liking my work. Hope you read my other stuffs and my friends' poems, too. I recommend all the poets who commented here. They'd make you fall, too :)


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

that's so nice of u i will surely read all of them


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Cool! :)


Shoma Abhyankar 5 years ago

hey,blaise25 me too posted apoem here on hubpages.would like your comments please at http://hubpages.com/@shomaabhyankar


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

oh wow, will do :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

A classic from you, I feel.

She could smell my perfume

and she waits no more.

Beautiful line in its simplicity.

Take care x


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

The perfume..has something to do with Astra Nomik's poem Summer Night of Love. She inspires me so much and more and this one is all bout her. Glad you loved this, Dim. Please read Astra's coz it's so beautiful. Thank you so much for the amazing comment. :) XO


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

On my way to Astra´s page now..........


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

:) You're awesome Dim!


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Awesome writing, WOW, loved it!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks a lot Movie Master :)


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baharlaghari 5 years ago from Jamshoro Sindh

very nice hub


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lionel1 5 years ago

Thank you very much for putting that together, it made my day. Thanks.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks for reading Baharlaghari :)

Always happy to see you in my hubs Lionel :) Means a lot. Thank you and God bless always


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

I snuck back for another read. Hah! :D This is one of your best poems Fehl. Cheers!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow, I'd give you Hugs-avalanche for that. :) Thank you Muf-Muf :) XO Cheers!


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Sensual and passionate. Great work. Voted awesome and beautiful


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Ubanic! :)


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OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

I really love this! Very desciptive without being too wordy, but you retained great diction. I really like the photograph too! Dis you shoot it yourself? I've been going through a bokeh obsession as of late. Great job and continue to write wonderful things like this :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much OutsideTheLines (nice username) :) I'm wishing the lyrics would be sung LOL I got the photo from photobucket or Tumblr. I cant remember anymore. I was searching from flickr for photos that allow cc for commercial use but didn't find anything I fancy. So I searched for 'girl in a bokeh' and found it. Perfect for my piece. Damn I love the photo so much. Think I'm on a bokeh obsession too Hehe. My latest hub has a bit of bokeh in it, too.

Thanks for the encouraging comments. :)


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OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

I will definitely have to check out the latest one then and thank you :) it's named after the name for my photography stuffs. Hah thats funny you say that because the whole time I was reading them I constructed a song for them to go with in my head(I do this any time I read poetry. Weird musician habit kicking in I suppose). And not a problem :) I merely give credit where it is due and you definitely deserve it!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks :) are your photo stuffs on your hubs? wow, now I wish the song inside your head come OutsideTheLines so I could hear them :D


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OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

Haha I have 1 on my first hub that I took a loooong time ago. Maybe I'll write a hub on concert photography soon and throw a bunch on it :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

can't wait :) do some bokeh :)


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OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

Will do! I might make my own discs and such :) I'll let you know when it's finished


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Yay! That would be awesome :)


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Enjoyed reading the poem, its Excellent.

Voted Up.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you very much Kamalesh050 :) have a great day!


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The original Eman 5 years ago from london

This is awesome for a moment i could picture myself in this . The picture you chose symbolizes the raw passion in this piece, Keep up the good work :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow reallyyy? The picture is perfect I couldn't publish this until I found the perfect match to suit my poetry. Thank you Eman :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

So expressive and sensual, beautifully sweet!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm glad you loved it Max :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Intense passion in work! I just loved it!

PS: Thanks for your wonderful comment on my rose wine hub.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Glad you loved this night of Friday Blaise lol

Thanks Vinaya!

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