No I Don’t Need A Second Opinion (limerick)

Such beauty it brought out tear

My soul would be tossed far and near

This vision of Joy

Was no mere man’s toy

A fact that her boyfriend made clear


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

You only make that mistake once. :) Good one my friend!


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Nat Amaral 3 years ago from BC Canada

hehehehe...Even I can see the humor in this one.


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Tooooo funny Martin! This is great!


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epigramman 3 years ago

Yes Sir Martin of limerick sainthood - that would burst the proverbial bubble for any man - sending you, my most funny man of the hubpages, incomplete without you, my warmest wishes from a very cold night at lake erie time ontario canada 1:45am


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

great laughs.


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sgbrown 3 years ago from Southern Oklahoma

Nice limerick! Sounds just about right! :)


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

You are incredibly funny and deliciously naughty! Up, funny and awesome.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, after reading your interview, I read your poetry differently, especially when I see the word Joy. This limerick takes a deeper meaning now that I know about the capital J.


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rasta1 3 years ago from Jamaica

She must be really hot.


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Martin, keep it up. I would buy a book or your limericks. Jamie


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Too funny..Three's a crowd. Hee..


Valleypoet 3 years ago

And he's probably a black belt in karate......LOL:-))


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I can see why he would make it clear.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Sure the boyfriend would want to make it clear.


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

While saying it up close and personal, no doubt!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

LOL..her bf should throw a sweater on her...she looks chilly - if not downright COLD..lol


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

You definitely know how to write a limerick! This was great...I can imagine both ends.

Voted up and funny.

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