Nothing in return

unbreak my heart
unbreak my heart

You couldn't be more perfect.

You are everything I want and more.

When you say that you love me

My heart melts down to the floor.

I can be on cloud nine within moments.

I have found heaven on earth

just hold me in your arms.

I know you are the one for me.

Do you feel the same way?

Or does your hear go astray?

Are you here beside me?

Because everything feels so cold.

I thought you were my home but I don't feel wanted.

do you see me in your dreams?

No that is not me

though you may be the one for me

I just might not be the one for you

I can not picture my life without you

Is it the same for you

is true you can replace me?

I think you could move on

If I were gone

I am nothing special

just another obligation

I would not only give you my hand but my heart

but do you even want it?

Or do I get nothing in return.

I just feel

I am close to losing you

I just hope it is not true

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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Oh dear Chrissie is he really worth it? There are so many loving and affectionate men out there to love and you are still so young. great poem though.


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you :D


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mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

Hey pretty lady. Once again you have captured my heart with your words. great poem! And this guy has gotta be one of the craziest guys ever to inspire these tears that you express through words. Such talent.


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

That crushing intensity that comes with love can feel like it's too much. Is he really that kind of guy or it this self doubt? Part of this sounds like you are letting him go already. Chrissie, if he giving you reason to doubt, ask why...you say near the end you get nothing in return. Geez, we all need love in return for love given!

Great hub, as always, Chrissie. Have a good weekend. :)


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you both so much! glad you enjoyed !!!


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epigramman 5 years ago

.....well you really wear your dear poetic heart on your sleeve and it's a majestic thing to see - and read!!


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

I sure do I like to just put it all out there I think it makes for great poetry! Thank you so much!

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