Nothing To Crow About (limerick)

It’s right that I feel like a louse

After killing small pest in the house

The cage which it knew

Should have been a clue

That I went cuckoo on pet mouse


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

You haven't lost your touch...very funny!


Joanne M Olivieri 3 years ago

Hilarious, Martin


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agapsikap 3 years ago from Philippines

Hahaha...funny!


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

My gosh what a day to start with lol very funny


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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Aweome...and funny as well. Good job, brother.


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Another good one.


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ignugent17 3 years ago

hahaha! As always.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Ouch!


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Insightful Tiger 3 years ago

oops! I hope you came up with a good story for the owner of said mouse, lol


Valleypoet 3 years ago

LOL....oops...he needs to make a quick visit to the pet shop for a replacement before anyone notices:-))


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Well, all is not lost, my dear Martin,

You now know that the mouse trap works.

So take it gently off of your ear

And place where you know mice now lurk.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Aw, poor mouse.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Poor little mousey...


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...loved the limerick...however...yes " tis a louse that kills a poor little mouse ".....


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Have had the catch the mouse blues. lol


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Ha! You mightn't be so popular with the owner of the mouse.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That mouse will come back to haunt you. Great work.


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Such a wonderful and priceless gift you provide ... a laugh and a smile!

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