There may be no good at all in November .......Verse

Look at this gunmetal sky and think back to
days I'd rather forget
No not jilted loves or lonely nights alone
it's the pure reality I regret

One teen child locking himself in the cold
solitude of his own room
Thereby holding back the wolves
that might devour him soon

I know in many ways those who
could did their best
But isolation is a lonely lover
long removed from my nest

Yes the solitude's of self imprisonment
bear wicked scars my friend
They will remain too
out beyond the very end

And with no reason at all
I feel these echoes even yet Alone
I have created a monster of sorts
one that beckons still it has shown

And these gunmetal skies remind me still
of hunger of loneliness and of shame
The smell of alcohol and tobacco and
raising of voices like some tragic game

I know I know grow beyond it
those walls that I put up before
Yet November winds hold tightened reigns
and remind me once more

There may be no good at all
in november


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Rayne123 3 years ago

Great poem

Are you writing according to your own experience.

It tells a very vivid story in such a good short poem


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Laurie , Ah the memories of youth , yes they are real , however we grow from them they still remain at times on the fringes ! Do they not ? Thank you for commenting my Canadian friend !..Ed

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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

Yes there is. MY birthday is in Nov. in 2 days actually. Nov. 27 I will be 26... eh I am getting old, perhaps there is no good in November after all.. lol good poem though my friend. You will find something good. Just gotta take the bad with the good.

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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Nikki , You just gave me the best reason for November , Happy Birthday NIKKI ! Luv ya kid ! Thank you for that reason !LOL

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