Now I Know Bliss


Bliss………………


You’re a part of me now……. in everything I do.

I breath in, I breath out and there you are, occupying my thoughts

Warm wind blows and it’s your breath on my skin.

Your voice in my ear at night before I sleep, speaking softly, it has that hypnotic effect.

Missing you intensely when you are gone, like a part of “me” is missing.

Only to become whole again when you are near.

Is this what love feels like when it is right?

So sweet like honey, I want to lick a drizzle of golden nectar that is you,

yet so very intense to be drawn into the vortex of love.

I’m falling, tumbling, happily to a new place of internal bliss………..


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VENZKHVAM 5 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

what a poem.

i HAD FALLEN IN LOVE WITH YOUR POEM.

THERE IS AN AMAZING WAY OF WRITING THIS POEM.

I WISH MY PARTNER TO ME THINKING ABOUT ME LIKE THIS.

A SIMPLE CRISP AND CLEAR , BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED IN LOVE AND EMOTIONAL FULFILLMENT

VOTED UP AND AWESOME


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writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

thank you so very much for your inspiring and heartfelt comment Venzkhvam. i am honored, truly i am.


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LuisEGonzalez 5 years ago from Miami, Florida

The photo/art is excellent as for the poem, not bad rather interesting.


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writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

coming from you Luis, I am not surprised you like the photo. I would have given it a line credit, but I can't remember where on the internet I picked that one up from. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. lvh


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Pamela99 5 years ago from United States

Beautiful poetry.


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writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

thank you pamela for stopping by and leaving your simply stated lovely comment. lvh


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must65gt 5 years ago

Auch a deep and well thought out poem, expressing the points exemplified by true love. Thanks for sharing it, great work.


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writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

my sincerest thanks for your wonderful comments and the follow Must65gt, your work is also very good. Lvh


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CodeMaster 4 years ago from Alaska, Anchorage

I love your poetry! I'm just going to leave a little "thank you" note on each one I read! ^_^ Again, very well done!


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writinginalaska 4 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

and thank you back CodeMaster, so nice to have some new comments ;) lvh


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Fabulous!

Love beautifully expressed - thank you for sharing, voting up and shared.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

So.....that's what you have been up to! LOL! Very intense and emotional....edgy. I liked it! Keep on writin'! ~ WB


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nenytridiana 4 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

Beautiful and Vote up!


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writinginalaska 4 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

@movieMaster thank you for the lovely comments and the follow :)

@wayneB. Your comments always put a HUGE smile on face, thank you. Yes, I have met the love of my life, been together over a year now and look forward to decades with him. :)

@nenytridina thank you so much for the lovely comment and the up vote. You might enjoy some of my other works too. :)


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badegg 4 years ago from Southern Appalachians

Wow! Excellent depiction of love...I didn't know what to do after I finished reading it...smoke a cigarette or take a cold shower!

Well done!


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writinginalaska 4 years ago from southeast Alaska Author

Lol, Badegg! before u take that shower go read Hush me Now and The Lion and the Lamb.....THEN I want your comments. ;)

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