Poem: Numb

I enter the parking lot

I sigh with dread

I slowly find the energy to go on

I open the door and start the walk


I numb my mind along the way

I wonder how long this will last

I dream of something better

I wonder what I've become


I leave the parking lot

I sigh with relief

I try to denumb my mind

I struggle to not let this define me

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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines


this was nice. if only i can numb my mind anytime that i want to. but i can't. thanks for sharing this :D

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Tom Cornett 7 years ago from Ohio

Wow...this reminds me of a past marriage....thanks...I think? :)

cool writing!

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kea 7 years ago Author

@Cris A: Hola...thanks for the comments. Yeah, numbing the mind is hard, but, for me, essential, for mental stability!

@TC: Thanks for the comments!

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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

I'm left wondering where this parking lot is... work, hospital, school? Very intriguing.

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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

My mind is in a constant state of numbness.

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mayhmong 7 years ago from North Carolina

Trust me, being numb all the time isn't all that great!

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kea 7 years ago Author

Thanks all for the comments...this is my first poem or whatever and I was nervous about even making it public!

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