On Clouds...

If you’re reading this

I miss you babe

And if you’re listenin,

Don’t just read my lips…


You’re clouding up my mind

How could you…

My senses desire all your soul

Just stay…


And if you’re listenin,

Don’t just read my lips.


© COPYRIGHT 2010 by B L A I SE


**Photo "kissing underwater" is not mine. It caught me. Saw it in tumblr blogs I can't remember exactly. Can't find it in my history either... It is so beautiful. Too much beautiful not to share. Anyway, they share things in tumblr so I thought of showing it here :) Ok, so if you're the owner and came across this page, just tell me who you are and I'll give the credit. You are so freaking talented! :) Thank you

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epigramman 6 years ago

Everytime I read your work I am on cloud 9!!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh thanks for the compliment :)


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

This is so sweet !!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you CM :)


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

An intimatly longing and enjoyable Hub. Great job Blaise!


Graham Bretton 6 years ago

I don't like this trend of adding music to your writing, scared to let your work stand on it's own?


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Mentalist :)

Hey there Graham B! First, I write because I wanna express my thoughts and my feelings. Second, I don't really care if my works stand out here or whatever. If they do, I'm glad. Third, if you don't like my trend, OWKAY..go to other pages, there are damn lots of your types out there. Fourth, that song is for someone who is NOT you! Fifth, I will upload song, write what I wanna write, say what I wanna say with of course some RESPECT. Lastly, you are indeed GB! G*&&@#^ B@$+@(&!

PS Thanks for reading


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Whoa Sushi, you were raging in fire. Thank you. I never knew you were still watching over me (my writings) And this comment, that was so heroic ;)

I was just so sick of Graham's nasty comments so I responded that way. Anyway, if you want war with him, leave my lovely page :)

But thank you really for this. :)

XO


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Beautiful, blaise! :) I love the compilation of image, song and lovely, yet simple expressions of words. All together makes a striking statement. It feels like - swimming in the clouds...

It's just amazing how much more we can say when we incorporate media, isn't it?

Great to read some new stuff from you. Hope all is well in blaise-land! :D


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

You perfectly always know what it feels :)

Indeed. Music and verses are like lovers, dear lord :)

Thank you. Hope all is pretty fine in Invictus-universe :) I am in a break of writing poetry and stuffs. Seems my muse is in a break, too LOL But I blurb whatever is blowing in my mind so expect short verses :D


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

wow... so few words, so deep a meaning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

CM thank you for dropping by :)


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Enigmatic Me 6 years ago from East Coast Canada

"My senses desire all your soul" - what can I say - exquisite illustration of what it feels to yearn for someone (did I just say yearn...lol)

I found that feeling in the early stages of learning what love is. Its nice to reminesce.. thank you


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Yearning exactly lol

Glad I made you reminisce :) Thanks Enigmatic


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Joy56 6 years ago

hope your muse returns, not nice to be muaeless..... Enjoyed this, thanks


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

I really hope so :) Thank you


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Lovely! It seem we have similar problem, Blaise. My head full of my one too at this moment. ^^ Thanks.


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

if you're reading this, i miss you babe... :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hello Blaise: I loved this poem. It is short and sweet, and gets the message across. We all know what its like to have someone we like who is constantly on our mind and we wish the "telepathy" was working better or stronger, so the other person could sense it too.

Some interesting comments here too, it seems. I like the video idea. Plenty of poets like to add photos, paintings, so why not videos? Why not music. Art is in the eye of the beholder. Always happy to rate your great hubs and poetry here, moi friend.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Freya Cesare - missing someone is not a problem hey ;) Thank you. I'll be reading yours tonight

CiscoPixie - then I'll read this again and again :) Thank you

Astra Nomik - Yea I guess I'll write short verses for a while :) Always concur with you.

Words capture the heart, music touches the soul. Like I said, they are lovers haha I'm always happy when you comment. Thanks moi friend. :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

not sure which was more fun..... your hub or your reply to the strange person hanging around us all, called Graham Brenton. well done xx


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

haha yea, sometimes you just have to strike back. ;) Good to see you, Dim.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

You are welcome. You are very creative. Don't let anyone take that away from you. : )


faithfulpen 6 years ago

Unique! Great poetry!


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aaaah! Lovely poem! I see Astra beat me to it here! Naughty woman! Heh! This is great romantic reading, you could have titled it "On Tenderhooks!" - it's a saying we have here when we are waiting and hoping for a situation to go our way. Cheers!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Astra - You always make me smile. Thank you :)

Faithfulpen - nice meeting you, thanks :)

Cheeky - haha It's good to see you two here. Tenderhooks, sounds great. Hmmm if I'd be in the mood, I would title my next with that ;p Cheers moi friend!


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

I love your short poems.They always seem to hit home.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Good to see you Mr. Joe :) Thank you


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Your poem is beautiful. I loved the kissing underwater pic. That's hard to pull off. And the video- The only Exception made me tear up a little. I'm a father. "I saw my daddy cry and curse the wind!" I've cursed the wind! Thank you Blaise!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Mik. Yup, it's so beautiful. I'd like to know who shot that. It's so perfect! Every time I look at it, it makes me feel like I'm on a dive..I could drown on that kiss but who cares ;)

Yup, pretty song. I know what you mean. Thanks Mik :)


hubpageswriter 6 years ago

A very creative hub. I enjoy the flow of words here.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

What beauty. Just simply-beauty voiced. Sweet.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks for the sweet comments Denise :)


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

I just can't get over that underwater kiss photo-so cool!


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Joy56 6 years ago

i am going under water meet me there,


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

sure, nice to have a dive :)


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

Thank you for the follow, I came to your hubs and found this one first, very beautiful and enjoyable, I will read further now, a talented writer you are, looking forward to further reads underwater:0)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much for the warm words :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago

Its crazy how so few words can say A LOT! Beautiful!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

It's the dive-effect I think lol

Thanks for reading :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago

No problem I loved it!


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OutsideTheLines 4 years ago from Tulsa, OK

Wow this seriously grasped me from the very first two lines. This is freaking GOOD. After reading this and some of your others you officially have my all-time best poets of hubpages award :) the photo is incredible too. If you find out who shot this let me know!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

oh my, "all-time best poets of hubpages award?" wow! Now, I'm in your level ;) thank you. I wish the photographer could read this so I could put his lovely name :) Sure :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

A beauty, voice of the heart, wow!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Maxi! Happy to see you here :)

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