On the shores of tempted hearts.

Source

Senses rage

words almost hollow

heartfelt passion

sensuous temptations;

my mind cries

my heart embraces

emotions a torrent

thrashing against the storms

losing all reality

in the winds

cutting through

the shores of life.

A love so wrong yet so right

please come back to me !!!

Wails of despair strangled from my being!!!

In gripping pains

my heart cries out

in fragments

like torn rags of insignificant worth.

Thoughts

within a mind's torrential

thrashings

further pained

by the salty sprays;

an obstacle so sure

my form in knotted mode

arms tightly clasp

round my being

against cruelty

the harshness of life.

Waves

a-teasing

taunting

crashing against a spirit already pained!!

Ebbing and flowing

almost sucking greedily at life's sustenance

leaving only primitive pains

hiding behind

each agonised mode.


Source

Dawn arises

in almost rude forces

penetrating

my enclosed

almost mollusc form.

Leave me

leave me

a cry so strangled!!

Leave me in my stagnant being.

Come back to me

my pained spirit

anonymously clutching

feeling the stirrings

of the

winds of change.

Creations of truth

awaken;

the bleakness of the seas lift

in momentous surges

from deep within.

A solitary teardrop

dries

as new thoughts emerge.

New dawns once camouflaged

into life's grief

yet never strangled into lifeless forms

never strangled entirely of life !!!

Source

Form uncoiling

pains subside.

A sense

embraces my once relentless woe.

In the prisms of infantile truths

clear honesty emerges

as lies are stripped of tainted follies.

A foolhardy love

tempestuous

yet empty;

contrasted

by reality;

a much needed awakening

of reality.

A love matured

tried

tested

and treasured.

The warmth of sunrise

fills my soul

elevating

that once contradictory heart.

Lust a mirror

of no substance

a reflection with no depth.

In gushing realisation

I turn back

in one final glance

at the horizon.

'Bon Voyage

my lover;

sensuous yet wrong!'

'You were not for me.'





Source

A spark full of love ignites my mottled mind.

You appear

by my side;

A love so true

so sweet

so dear!!

I rush into your arms

so strong

so familiar

for that embrace so warm so true.

My soul mate

my love

my all.

In sweet embrace

reality

re-emerges ;

my heart feels

my heart sees

my true love;

we walk into our tomorrows

a love so true

to be shared

eternally.




© 2014 Eiddwen

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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

I love this, Eddy. Many of us have experienced untrue love. The pain can be overwhelming. But then comes Prince Charming. All good things come to those who wait!


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BNadyn 2 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

Such a sweet last picture there at the end to bring it all together. Beautiful poem and such a passionate expression of pain and finding love. Voted up! Enjoy your day. :)


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Good day to you Sha and thank you so much as always. Here's to wishing you a wonderful day .

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

So glad you enjoyed this one also BNadyn and your comment greatly appreciated.

Eddy.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

After so many twists and turns of life, dawn of true love is all welcome ! Great description of every phase ! Loved every word so rich in meaning in this very fine poem. Voted up.


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

The poem was lovely of course, but it was the title that interested me. I'm having trouble finding a title for my new novel; it really is a struggle, and I am so impressed by the creativity you use in your titles. Well done as always my talented friend.

billy


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sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

very effective commune


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Harishprasad ;your words are so greatly appreciated. Here's wishing you a great day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Actually I've made a bit of an error here because the title in my profile is a little different to the one on here. Only slightly so it doesn't matter. Thank you again my friend and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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breakfastpop 2 years ago

You've described one of life's journeys with elegance and passion. Up, beautiful and awesome.


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The Examiner-1 2 years ago

This had me thinking Eiddwen but it was beautiful to read and I loved the music/singing in the video. I gave it a thumbs up and shared it and Pinned it (yes, I figured it out and got them back).

Wishing you the best.

Kevin


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much sujaya.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

As always breakfastpop your comment is so kind and greatly appreciated. Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Hi Kevin so glad you got it sorted and thanks for the shares too. Here's wishing you a great day too also to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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janetwrites 2 years ago from Georgia country

Beautiful words! You perfectly described the feeling of pains when finding out that love is not true. I loved the happy ending of your poem where one is finding true love. Thank you for sharing this.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment means so much janetwrites and here's wishing you a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

Great poem, outstanding photography. Loved it all. ^


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Eddy i was not too sure about your happiness when i first started to read, then i realized you were writing of a long ago love, then it came into view, finding love again. I loved it. You are a talented poet my friend....


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

Many of us can identify with the experiences you allude to here. What feels like love isn't always the best choice.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Jackie and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Hi ruby thanks so much and your great comment so appreciated. Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment FlourishAnyway.

Eddy.


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Donna Suthard 2 years ago

Eddy, your poetry is so touching and beautiful.. touches our heart with memories of how our love used to be...Thank you!!


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Dana Tate 2 years ago from LOS ANGELES

So elegantly put. love can be painful and unpredictable. You are trusting someone with your most precious possession -your heart. I love the way you described it along with your picture as torrent and wild , and then went on to describe how after a storm there is a new beginning. A beginning of new life, new love, new growth. This is by far my favorite Eddy. Thanks for sharing voted up and awesome!


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

This is different from your usual poems, Eddy, but I love the emotions it expresses. So good!


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W1totalk 2 years ago

The idea of almost getting it right has a place but its if you recognize love is legitimate. When it happens, I can only imagine at this point.


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AliciaC 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

I love the way in which this poem is filled with tension and drama but reaches peace and contentment at the end!


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Eddy. Wonderful, such passion and depth. Truly special.

Graham.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

You are most welcome Donna and here's wishing you a great day.

Eddy,


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment as always o greatly appreciated Dana.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Blossom and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you W1totalk and here's wishing you a great day to come.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment as always so greatly appreciated Alicia.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Hi Graham and as always thank you so much for this great comment from over the border.

Here's to so many more for us both to share and wishing you a wonderful day my dear friend.

Eddy.


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D.A.L. 2 years ago from Lancashire north west England

Once again beautiful and magical poetry has been produced from your heart. The opening image is brilliant and very atmospheric. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Beautiful poetry with such lovely photos. You always manage to express your work with great emotions.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much DAL your comment so greatly appreciated and here's hoping all is well with you.

Wishing you a wonderful day from across the border.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment so appreciated also DDE AND wishing you a great day and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

You portray a powerful journey with your words here Eddy....all the waves and ebbs of love. Well done and striking images as always.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

So glad you enjoyed this one Jodah and wishing you a wonderful day.,

Eddy.


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carter06 2 years ago from Cronulla NSW

This is really lovely Eddy and makes it easy to be caught up in the emotion, pain and passion of love..achingly heartfelt..

Cheers


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much carter06 and wishing you a wonderful weekend

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This is incredible poetically and picturesquely. Loved it. Pearling this.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Rasma and wishing you a great day .

Lots of love all the way from Wales.

Eddy.


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Cherylann Mollan 2 years ago from India

So beautifully written. Wrong love sometimes feels so right that when it leaves, you think you've lost everything. But I guess you just have to remember what John Steinbeck said, "Nothing good gets away." And if it does get away, then it just wasn't meant for you. Very poetic and profound. Voted up!


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Cherylann for taking the time to stop by and leave this great comment. It is so greatly appreciated and here's to many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Awesome and up. This is the most profound piece that you have ever written.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment as always so greatly appreciated Deb.

Eddy.

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