Once Upon a Sunset

Once upon a sunset

Two lovers’ divides----

Left broken under a crimson sky

-----love dies

Tears became her champagne

Drown in all agony and pain

Like of propane---easily identify

Envelopes are open---she reads what’s inside

A feeling of remorse

When Karma run its course

Left alone in dungeon

She prays for second chance

"-----------If only he’s meant for her, he will return she speak softly within------"


And once upon a sunrise

A magical cupid shoots its spear

Went right through them

Crimson sky became clear

Two hearts entwined

Beauty of love combine

Eternal love, eternal love

She dreamt came true

*And she smiles

"He was made for me----He belong to me---We’re meant to be---she softly speak within"

Old saying sure is true, "if he belongs to you, he will return"

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Lizam1 4 years ago from Victoria BC

Beautiful words and photographs. Voted beautiful.

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FitnezzJim 4 years ago from Fredericksburg, Virginia

A variant of that old saying at the end of the article appears on bumper stickers around here, and expresses negative consequences for the love that does not come back.

It is good to see you back and writing again.

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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

What lover would not be touched by this? Masterfully performed. Thank you.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful and so romantic.

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dreamseeker2 4 years ago

Love the sentiment of the poem and the pictures! Great writing! : )

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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi everyone thank you very much for commenting and reading. Very well appreciate it! FitnezzJim, I too am glad to be back and start writing again! Thank you.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

A tribute to the saying, "if you love it set it free"....and it will come back. This was a moving poem and a joy to read.

Voted up and beautiful.

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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Mmmmmm....a perfect first poem in the morning, my friend! Love come full circle!

I've missed you too..

up and sharing..

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greencha 4 years ago from UK

Beautiful poetry,and photos

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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

thank you very much! :)

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