On the Prowl

Hunting ground:

I am on the prowl

Not ready to give up

I hear the blood in my ears

Speaking your name

Your scent makes me lick my lips

The chase is on

Run cause I will chase you

I will run so hard

I will find you

And when I find you

I will destroy you

Dig my claws in your throat

I will watch life fade through your eyes

Whisper to me how does it feel

Tell me do I hurt you ?

Good! I can almost sense your fear

So dazzling mixed with the sweat

The little heart of yours pumping

The little veins screaming

Oh, Run Run! let me chase you

Let me mess with your mind

I draw so near

The little cold heart of mine

Screams , pounds for your flesh

My hooves cut through the distances

Cutting your life span

Love your flesh will be mine

In no time

You will watch me feed

And your flesh will be the treat

dӑяК fцйЗrдl ððð

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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Scaryyyyyy!!!! But than wolf, I imagined this more like vampire girl chasing the man she hate. It is more beautiful that way for me. Beside, wolf do not think or enjoy their food's fear before the fiest. It is too close with disturbed human mind than animal. ^^ Are you being angry with someone, Sis? :p

So long not visit you in your hub, how are you, Sis? I miss your beautiful old avatar. :)

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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A tense and evocatively enjoyable poem Uriel!!

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Freya my friend :D well if you read the Mercy thompson series and Alpha and omega by " patricia briggs on " http://search.4shared.com/q/1/mercy%20thompson " ull see a different version of Werewolves !! gotta say they were awesome books + smoking werewolves:D

I am not angry just finished my official exams and trying to get rid of all the stress :) hoping to stop by on ur account and read more of ur lovely poems from time to time :D


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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

haunting! i wrote a poem similar to this in that this guy was my prey and i wanted him to hurt, and another one where as if i were a vampire and he was my feast, that one is called "Bloodlust". good work! oh and just to let you know you put One instead of On in the Title.

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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Ah, wow! Thank you, Sis. Love you! :D

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Nikkij504gurl i will check it out ~ thanks for your comment and having the time to read my poem. I hope you enjoy your journey here on hubpages

Freya !!!~~~~~~ thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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epigramman 6 years ago

well I am on the prowl for more of your fine fine writing


Lon Chaney Jr.

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

epigramman, totally honored :D Thanks for your lovely comment hoping again to live up to your standards:D

ralwus 6 years ago

It's all head for the brambles in bare feet and butt nekked, she after us all with her fangs and claws. Sheesh! You frighten me. LOL

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

hhehehehhe ~not that scary though :D i am getting a more refined look since i am heading to college so no more razor sharp teeth :P

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