A violins soft echo....free verse poetry

The meloncholy sound of the
slightest draw across the strings
Awakened me this morning
l found myself drawn to
a green field
In my daylight dream

I watched in awe as a long and
flowing gown moved
in a softening breeze
Some timeless melody that
a forgotten writer
once penned

And yet one in which her
delicate hands only
could master
And as the alibaster clouds kept
time with the my
emotions
She awent on head
not waiting for me

No part of this man will ever
touch her
Nor maybe ever dream her again
but
I will always have
the softest echo
of a violin









Comments 15 comments

Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Beautiful ahorseback...so sweet and gentle are your words just like that of a violin which always touches my heart. Thank you so much for writing this.

Sunnie


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SommerDalton 4 years ago

Voted up, beautiful, and awesome!!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Amazing images and the words set my heart beating. Just wonderful.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Beautiful poem. I love the musical reference in the verses, the wind, etc. Lovely.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Tender and beautiful my friend.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Love the refrains of the violin. Passing this on.


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Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

A sweet write...enjoyed it :-) Voted up!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi Sunnie Day ! If I were only a Violin ! lol.......shhhh !...:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Sommer , Thank you so much !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy rose ,Thanks a bunch girl ! Its a good thing right , a pounding heart !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Teaches , hello ! Thank you for being you !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thanks Eddy , you are so ........tender and beautiful hehe !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Darry Imdavis thank you kind sir ,


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

This poem is written with such finesse and grace. I was there with you in your daydream and I never wanted to come back. Absolutely beautiful ahorseback.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Minnetonka ....your so nice ...!Ahh thank you dear !

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