One Thought (poem)

Her beauty is the light that sparks the day

He is the dream I had again last night

She walks along my pathways of delight

And if he said hello what would I say

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To hold her hands a crazy thought you’re right

And if he kissed me fancies set astray

If I said hi would I be cast away

Another dream would wither far from sight

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How cruel and foolish insecurity

Two lovers lost and floating in the wind

With one common thought that was shared by two

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There somewhere in time together they’d be

And so much had passed as they sweetly grinned

Remember those days I loved only you

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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Your poems amaze me!!! Awesome Job!!!!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

What a final line! You did a great job of changing the entire complexion of the poem in only a few words.

Great Job and Great Poem!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

MHatter,, I agree with Patty.. your poems and you are amazing. I love love poems and you are a master at it.. hugs

sharing

debbie


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

lovely.


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

A beautiful, dreamy poem, Mhatter. :)


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautifully written! Such nice flow, and you painted a very vivid picture of young love, and the feelings later on in life.

Voting up......


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Beautifully amazing here buddy!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Great work, MHatter, romance poetry at its most sincere. A great, creative job!


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Mhatter......you are just so brilliant......loved this one.....so romantic and beautifully woven. up voting ans shared.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Mhatter as always , you write the best romantic poem.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

Romantic poetry is your proprietary....Mhatter, you excell !


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Midnight Lights 4 years ago from USA

Reminds me when I was a teenager and had those insecurities.. When I got older and less insecure I went right back to that guy and asked him out! It didn't last long, but I'm so happy I still tried. :) Failure is just a word, you only truly fail if you don't ever try. ;) Good job reminding me of my youth... but not my adult life lol :P


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Really enjoy reading your poetry Mhatter, always impressive work. Voted up, beautiful, and interesting :)


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

This poem is so beautifully written and with such feelings !

Vote up and more !!!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ah, yes, days gone by...thanks for the memories.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Young love, very beautiful my poet friend..Cheers


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful Would be lovely to relive the best moments of young love.


Janhorner 4 years ago

Simply, lovely, and that's all I'm going to say.

Jan


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Mmmmmemories made yummmmmmy...


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Reminds me of a high school reunion, for some reason, but it's beautiful nonetheless. So is the song - I remember it. Voted up.


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pringoooals 4 years ago from Edinburgh

Beautiful words.


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Indian Chef 3 years ago from New Delhi India

Very Nice and beautiful poem.

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