One Wish Use It Wisely (limerick)

When asked if your world change you could

What wrong would you wish to make good

His mind didn’t roam

His wish turned toward home

Make wife’s bat of foam and not wood


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Clever limerick, thanks for sharing!


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

oh it pains.... that makes him witty & the limerick as well!


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Very Clever and Fun!!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What a find! LOL Very thoughtful =)


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mizjo 4 years ago from New York City, NY

Mhatter, this is too good! Fred might wish Wilma's to be of wood and not stone!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Funny! You do make me laugh and it's such good therapy!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

HaHaHaHa, Thank's for making me LOL..Great one..Cheers


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

Very clever... shared with my husband... sharing on facebook... I found this rather amusing!


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Hi Mhatter - bet my husband would prefer the foam as well! lol


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Redberry Sky 4 years ago

Love the little twists at the end of your limericks, mhatter99 :)


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shampa sadhya 4 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

Voted up and awesome!

It is unique. I enjoyed it. Every husband would prefer so. Nice one.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

LOL I bet! The lumps on his head must be getting huge by now.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That's what happens when you marry an old battleax.

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