Our First Kiss -- Never Ever Forgotten

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What a memory of yesteryear. Cannot forget it of course. All was set accordingly with hope: a rose hidden in our jacket and lots of perfume on the shoulders and neck. Who would've resist it? The time was around 6:45 p.m. and the sun was almost caressing the ocean in front of us. Who could've resisted to all that preamble to blissfulness?

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Couldn't resist it anymore...

Walking along through the steps of life

This is the place where I came to posses my prize

Sunset and breezy air to witness our wildest dreams become true

Jeans, t-shirts and the best of our moods

Blissful day of that month of yesterday

Summer that was settling and coming after May

Walking through a boardwalk that would sustain our hopes

Seeing that sunset that would witness a gift from up above

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Holding hands and committing to ourselves

Hearts and emotions that cannot be held

Feeling on top of the world, what can I say

holding each other knowing we reached the end of that chapel

I'm face to face caressing your tender life at sixteen

Suddenly you put my hand against your chest

"Feel my heart and you will realize, it feels like paradise"

Then I get closer to her and instinctively slowly close our eyes

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Tenderly I reached for that precious forehead

"This kiss is from my mom," I said

Slowly went down to her left cheek... (sighs...)

"This kiss is from sister Mary"-- a Kodak moment, click!


Blissful breathing of ours

finally aiming at your lips full of desire

matching emotions that were expected since birth

The first kiss, the first time we feel on top of this earth

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You let that tenderness ran wild like a horse

first time you french kissed me with no remorse

embracing my whole life around

I dropped my jacket and forgot about that rose

"Why did you kiss me like that," She said

"You have awaken the woman in me Joseph"

"It just happened sweet Ann Marie"

"I dropped that poor rose that was for you, can't you see?"

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That was our first kiss that we never forgot

Sure we wanted to feel more than just love

She did move on and broke my heart indeed

but deep inside I kept those moments within me

Funny how it feels like it was yesterday

The rose ended up in her hands on that day of may

Still surprised how she responded to my kiss

I guess is human nature!

It was the most wonderful bliss!

That will never go away, even if I get older

this is a memory I will always miss...

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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

A man snatches the first kiss, pleads for the second, demands the third, takes the fourth, accepts the fifth - and endures all the rest. ~Helen Rowland LOL... Beautiful poem!


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

A beautiful memory and a reminder for us all of that special first kiss.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Thanks Tammy. You were laughing all the way huh? Hellen Rowland did better than me then!

@Thanks for the visit Xstatic! Was a roller coaster, even by writing it. Those were the years! Darn it!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

It is pretty special, isn't it? I loved this Joseph; you did well my friend and I now remember something I had forgotten about.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Okay Billy you better take care of that. You never know! Thanks for stopping by! Much appreciated my friend!


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

I think I have a short circuit, I can't remember those days!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hahaha! Curiad! That was hillarious! Glad to have you in here. Nothing like good memories, not taxable yet!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Way too many episodes of not inhaling to remember the first. I seem to recall, but it could be a flashback I've been expecting for decades. I actually think the first was more of an obligation of two dating, while later down the line, several are very memorable. (I think.) Great poem, very visual! Up & Awesome & Beautiful


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi RCrumple, I understand your point. Some girls are expecting the moment of their lives and you have to make your moves...even if you might not be ready. Thanks for sharing!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

My dear sweet lord.. Just simply beautiful. You get more awesome every day

Your poetry so Divine. Debbie


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

I admit I had to laugh at the mother kiss, a little unexpected and of course I didn't believe it, but the finale as expected. I wonder how anyone can forget a first kiss. Beautifully said in your own style.


kjforce 4 years ago

Lord De Cross...great poem on your memory of your 1st kiss...you chose just the right words to paint the picture..enjoyed the poem...mine was more like a poem of the darkside..of which words would not due it justice..something like" we closed our eyes and did not speak,as we moved our faces cheek to cheek, but upon the contact..our braces locked, my lip did bleed as did his..so much for that memory of our first kiss" true story...but what a memory...thanks for the trip down memory lane..


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Very sweet, Lord. And nicely presented. :) Voted up and more.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Honestly I don't remember my first kiss, but when I do, I hope it was like yours!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

So very sweet, that first kiss of yours!!! What is it about that first kiss, we will never forget? I guess the anticipation of something new that we have never experienced before sticks in our minds forever, and all the tingling going on and on and on all over the place. Weeeeeee This is beautifully written. You and your angel muse have been kickin' it in high gear here lately. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I remember my first kiss..We hit each other's nose..LOL..Fun read. Enjoyed Joseph...


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Malona G. 7th grade. 24th & Divisadero. Outside the original Ben & Jerry.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Thanks Sweet Debbie, as Faith stated, your soul shines through your smile, and you truly love our Lord. This inspiration came as a sugestion. Glad you liked it!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Jackie Lynnley, It was as written. The idea came to us... and we figure, this time there won't be a point of no return. Thanks for the smiles though!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

KjForce, thanks so much for sharing your experience! Wow! That was a true revelation. You always amaze me with your sarcasm amd wit.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Ttoombs08, Your stopping by is greatly appreciated. We love your fun hubs, and we should visit you more. Time is limited at times. Thanks! Yeah! It was a real inspiration. Nothing better than delving into the past.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Pickles! Just make believe it was like ours, so you will forget the ones... that might've caused you bad memories. Your response was fun! Hope you are doing great!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Faith Reaper, Sure it was the best thing a human being could ever have experienced. Funny though, some friends do not remember it? I think they don't want to remember... for obvious reasons. Love is the greatest feeling. Thanks for your sharp, moving and Joyous comment. You made us smile of course.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Always Exploring, that was funny! Never had these issues... like yours. I guess both of you went to the same side. Not much space when you are kissing a loved one. Nice to hear your story! Have a good one Rubi!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Mhatter, 1964? San Francisco? That was an awesome era. way before Vietnam and Nixon and his Watergate. Malona Wow! Hopefully she will read this declaration of yours. Thanks for the clues!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

P.S. - I found some of your older gems before I joined HP in April, and my favorite of all time favorites is the Valentine's poem - and I commented of course on those past gems. Just FYI in case they don't pop up anywhere on your radar. Have a lovely night. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

I have it Faith! Good night my friend! Just so much to catch up! Take care! Thanks!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

A special moment - a special memory, thank you for sharing it with us!

Wish I could remember mine:-)


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Lesley, What is this thing about not remembering your first kiss? I guess some people do not remember that moment. I have to believe you because you are a talented and serious writer. Hope you are having a nice weekend! And thanks for those panoramic hubs. Just gets better!


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

I remember my first kiss, it was a nightmare! lol! didn't have a clue what to do! the second was awesome though! wonderful poem with great imagery, voted up and shared! nell


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Good evening Nell Rose, that was cute! We all went through the same experience with different scenarios. Comments like yours and other friends own experience truly enrich this hub. Hope you know already how to deal with the waiting drama. I really enjoyed your comment!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Thanks for the memories. This flowed like good, mellow wine and it was so delightful. Love the pics and video. Passing this on.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Beautiful,tender and precious.

A true recipe for success when dealing with tender matters of the heart.

Enjoy your days.

Eddy.

Just wanted to tell you that I am back on my old HubPages account now under my name Eiddwen.


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shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

Such a beautiful piece! so heartfelt and romantic! I really loved it !:)

voted up :)


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

yummmmmm....me want sommmmme! Sexy memories, Lord!


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aykianink 4 years ago

Kodak moment indeed. Beautiful poem:-)


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pongogirl2 4 years ago from California, USA

such beautiful poem:) love reading it so much:)


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Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Ohhhhh… I remember that first kiss of love. It’s the one we always compare to all of the kisses that follow. Loved the Journey song too. They are one of my favorites.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi Rasma, catching up with you! We all can still enjoy the memories of those precious moments. Thanks for being here with us!

@Hi Eddy, just found the switch of accounts. Thanks for sharing your positive thoughts and your amazing imagination. Thanks for taking your tiem and leave a wonderful comment!

@ImKarn23 , LOL, you want a piece of the experience? I know it was read and felt. Your comment was read yesterday and was a little busier. Glad you enjoyed it!

@shruti sheshadri, We appreciate your visit and input. Coming froma woman, this compliment is well recieved. Nice seeing you and welcome to HP.

@aykianink, There you go. Temperatures of 75 degrees, breezy and no worries at all. Well nature was there to hlep us. Thanks!

@ pongogirl2 , I know! can you imagine yourself in that situation? Much appreciated for your visit. You should take the advice and help a brother or friend! Viola!

@Genna East, I'm 49, so Journey was in our mind since 1979. The great 3scape! Your vivid comment made us smile and came to the conclusion that you did enjoyed your first and second and third, thoroughly! I guess you keep those memories in your heart!


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

Awesome and beautiful!! :) Wow, that was so romantic and gave me a few ideas lol. I loved this to a great deal, really captivated the fluidity of your words. That's one of your strong suits, it just seems to blow beautifully. I'm in awe of your talent, De Cross. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Aubrey, now you can use these techniques yourself. Let us know if you stole a kiss from your prospective sweetheart!

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