Our Love is Like a Rainbow

Our Love is Like a Rainbow

The rain was pouring down outside and running down the window pane. The sun was streaming in and through the glass I could see the most beautiful rainbow. It was so wonderful that it reminded me of the one I love. My Truelove.


Our Love is Like a Rainbow

Our love is like a rainbow

Arching gently to the ground

Dreaming of togetherness

Without a simple sound


The richness of our kisses

So moist and tender still

Deep is this love of ours

That will completely fulfil


Through struggles and strives

Our true love will never die

It overcomes all emotions

We will never ever lie


You are my constant strength

A man of strong desire

When your arms are wrapped around me

I know I am on fire


This passion burns within me

We ignite our love again

Touch me, hold me, feel me

Breathe love through every vein


Your fingers caress me gently

Your lips and tongue probe more

This amazing sensation

Reaches through me to the core


Always stirring with such passion

As our limbs gently entwine

We are complete and as one again

Your love and mine

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richtwf profile image

richtwf 5 years ago

Another beautiful poem of love delivered by HP's Resident Goddess of Love - Lady Aphrodite! You weave such wonderful words of love and combine them with strong erotic imagery - Wow! - What an amazing sensual synergy that is!

Always a great delight to read and to be inspired by your words of love. Keep spreading the love message!

God bless you Lady A!


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Pamela99 5 years ago from United States

This is a beautiful poem of love and passion. Very nice.


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Darlene Sabella 5 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

Rainbow and love to go together, love is located at the end of the rainbow, not a pot of gold. You have such a sweet and loving heart, you must have this in your life inorder to understand it. Love & peace darski


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AmyTaylor 5 years ago

Passion to the xxxtreme! So beautiful, your so lucky


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epigramman 5 years ago

...your hub space and the writing which blesses it is like a rainbow ......now we know what Judy Garland was singing about .....somewhere over the rainbow is a love doctor who touches us deeply and prescibes her potent and priceless poetry to make the hub world glad she is here and that we are here to enjoy each other!!!!!


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aware 5 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

Very moving poem about love entwined.

ray


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Richtwf you are so generous with your comments as always. I am honoured that you enjoy my poetry. We all need to experience a wonder of love. Take care.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Pamela I love it when you visit and leave a comment.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Darlene you are always such a joy and I always love your comments. Thank you for your time - I always so appreciate it. Take care.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Amy, everyone has the ability to love and it is awesome when it is reciprocated.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Epigramman, you know I always look forward to your visits. Fantastic comments - you have such a way with words. Love and hugs. x


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks for your visit Aware I so appreciate it.


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

You certainly are the Love Goddess, this Saddle had to go take a cold shower, your sensual pictures added to the heat. You are a magnificent lover and I know your partner is deeply in love with you as you are with him.

I wish you both happiness and lots of LOVE...just keep showering us with your tender words so descriptive and steaming with richness and great choice of words.

Your verse is poetry in motion and it is needed here at the Hubs, thank you for sharing your creativeness with us.


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thougtforce 5 years ago from Sweden

This poem conveys love and a wonderful sense of passion! You are just amazing! And the photos add that little extra! (Even if your poem dont need it) Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts! Take care!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Saddlerider, you just know what to say to make a girl happy. Sorry you had to take a cold shower! I am glad I had that effect on you though - it shows the magic is working! Love and happiness to you always, you so deserve it. x


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

You are very kind Thoughtforce - I love your visits to share my poetry. Thank you.


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Lovingu 5 years ago from London

Your words are beautiful and your poem is just so passionate. I love your poetry and you never fail to make me feel so romantic. Your choice of pictures are brilliant too.


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twentyfive 5 years ago

This is so passionate and pure of love. You always write with your heart speaking. Loved this :)

xx blaise


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is so beautiful.You write with such passion.I'm so thrilled to follow you.Thank you.

Cheers


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warm_whispers 5 years ago

goshhhhhh if that guy's me i have nothing to say than, ..as she spoke's of understanding, I looked up and saw the rainbow leap with flames of many colors over me.

lost with words to comment i have no more


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

so much Love and passion it's overwhelming. A beautiful Poem my dear. God Bless


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damian0000 5 years ago from Belfast

beautifully done --- love, emotion and passion always come through so strongly and eloquently in your poems!

More of the same please :-)


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, I love your poetry, so sensual and warm. You have a real passion for writing, and it shows, my friend! Any more and I would have to open a window and let the steam out! :) Great hub, and a tribute to love and rainbows. I love your pictures too. Very evocative!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so pleased my poem made you feel romantic. Romance is so special and makes us feel so loved and wonderful. I appreciate your comments, thank you so much.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Twentyfive, the only way I can write is from what I feel in my heart. For me it is the best and only way.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Always Exploring, thank you. I am always so thrilled that you read and comment on my poetry - thank you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Warm_whispers - you are wonderful - thank you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Vietnamvet - I love yo visiting my poetry.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Damiam0000 you are very kind, I really appreciate your interest and comment.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Cheeky Girl, yes I seem to have created rather a lot of steam here. I always so appreciate our comments - thanks ever so!


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Heart Felt Book 5 years ago from New York, NY

THIS IS DEEP IN MY LADY.. LOVE THIS.. I ALSO ENJOYED THE PICTURES. HOW LOVELY THE COLORS ARE AMAZING.. GREAT POEM THIS IS THE SEASON FOR LOVE. THANKS, VOTED


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Heart Felt Book - yes the colours are amazing aren't they - I just love colour. Yes definitely the season for love!


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b. Malin 5 years ago

I love rainbows, they symbolize so much...what a lovely read, very rich and rewarding. Love the pictures too. I'm glad I stopped by.


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland

I always thought of rainbows of promises, and if your rainbows promise more of love as sensual, close and warm as that - I know you will enjoy that forever love we are all either dreaming of, share, or remember. Lady Love, your words and mastery of them are enchanting as usual.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I appreciate you stopping by and leaving such lovely comments b. Malin - thank you so much.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Erin I hope that everyone can give and receive love such as this.


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

Those moments together are the climax but of course it is all the things leading up to it that heighten the passion. Your poems start and end with romance and that's why so many of us keep coming back for a reminder of those precious shared moments. Cheers from sizzling Oz


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

A very beautiful passion filled poem,i will look at rainbows differently now! :-)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I absolutely agree with you Attemptedhumour it is all about living up to the climax. Each and every moment should be lived in love. I am humbled by your comment - thank you so much.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Rainbows are beautiful and so are you. Thanks Kashmir56.


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katiem2 5 years ago from I'm outta here

EWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is cosmic,brillant, steamy, wonderful and packed with passion! Gotta love a rainbow and love is a great comparison. I love the rain am drawn to it and the rainbow is the rest in all rains beauty. Love, Peace and JOY!


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anjalichugh 5 years ago from New York

That was so passionate. Beautiful projection of thoughts. It reminded me of my hub (you've already visited) which had the same tenor.

http://hubpages.com/literature/Touchedbyamagicwand

Great work.


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

Steamy storms of love collide in the kaliedescope of your passion. You rule the heat of hub poetry. Cheers.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Katie, I always love your comments. You, in my opinion, are the oracle of love. Thank you for visiting. Take care.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Anjalichugh for your comments. Yes I do remember reading your lovely hub.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Sligobay! I love your suggestion of 'kaliedescope of your passion' - awesome. I love to see you here.


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pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

I agree you are the love Godess! Beautiful poetic voice! Thank you!


hubpageswriter 5 years ago

I have always wondered how it is to pronounce your beautiful name. acaetnna. What does it means if you don't mind. Beautiful poem here. You have a talent for it, too bad I'm not an expert in poetry for I'd love to create such perfect words like you have. Here's to more acaetnna.=)


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

My friend you made this poem so beautiful. You also made my day so colorful. Your heart is beautiful like a rainbow and I never doubt about this. I hope your love message would be heard by all the people in the world...amen. I give my Vote special for you. Love and peace!

Prasetio


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Pennyofheaven, you are very kind.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Hubpageswriter. My name has been derived from an ancient Greek name, and I agree it is difficult to pronounce but guess it suits me! You are always so thoughtful and your words reassuring to me. Thank you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Prasetio - you are wonderful and spoil me with your beautiful words. Thank you.


ariasnote 5 years ago

Wow, you seem to have nailed it...true love at its best.


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Lady_E 5 years ago from London, UK

Absolutely lovely - you are so gifted with these love poems. :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Lady_E I am pleased you think so. I am grateful that a talent such as yourself takes the time to read and comment on my poetry.


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Secretmission 5 years ago from Sandwich

Definitely our resident 'Love Goddess', how do you always manage it acaetnna? You are clearly in love and want the world to know. I love the way you likened your love to a rainbow, rainbows are so beautiful.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes I am in love and want to shout it from the rooftops - thanks Secretmission, you are awesome.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Buttons up but those pics are going to give me night-mares! Great hub!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh dear I can't give you nightmares! Sorry! I love your comments - thank you.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Wow! Now this is what I call erotic. Well done, acaetnna! I’ll have to read it again. And the pictures :)))) Just to make sure I got the message in all its widths and depts.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks MartieCoester I always so appreciate your comments. Thank you.


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stricktlydating 5 years ago from Australia

Just beautiful!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Stricktlydating - great to see you here.


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Stole a copy of the second image here...LOL

Liked the poem will look to see what else you have here...


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

It is lovely isn't it - I wont tell anyone that you stole it!! So glad you liked the poem. You might enjoy 'If I Had Three Wishes', too!


TattoGuy 5 years ago

My only dilema was whether to rate this awesome or beautiful, I picked beautiful because it was just so touching. Just finished reading Chrissies latest poem and I swear you 2 girls are so alike in your poems that I just cant get enough of you both.

What a damn shame 2 lucky buggers have you both but hey you will always have my support, write more ok and I hope he appreciates you, you are one lovely person x


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow TattoGuy you are such a loyal supporter. Your comments are amazing. Thanks SO much for your loyal support.


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Nayothara 5 years ago

AWESOME! The best place for love, I find here in your hubs.... I am so blessed been able to read your poem and feel the change of real true love. Thanks for sharing these beautiful thoughts and keep doing that, it would make this world a much better place! Thank you.. :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

How lovely to have your comments again Nayothara - I've missed you! Thank you Nayothara I am glad you enjoyed this poem.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

Ummmm... did you write something? I was noticing some hot pictures and you know...

Awesome poem... you are quite the romantic... very hot writing with class....


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Suburban Poet - I have missed you. Thank you for stopping to read and commenting - I appreciate it.


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ZulmaDear 5 years ago from TheCrosses, LasCruces

I love Rainbows :)

and now i can read a poem about love and Rainbows!

thank you. ;)

P.s: ur poem made me smile.. that illuminating smile that only means...

I feel your words.

Peace&Love..

ZulmaDear :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am glad this made you smile ZulaDear. I love rainbows too, they are simply so beautiful. Thanks for reading my poem and for your comments.


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azure_sky 5 years ago from Somewhere on the Beach, if I am lucky :)

Precious words to make a body ache! Thank you for sharing your beautiful words!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you Azure_sky.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Beautiful words and pictures to compliment them.

You really are very talented writer.

Take care acaetnna


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am humbled by you comment Eiddwen - thank you so much.


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Joshua Kell 5 years ago from Arizona

Lovely


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Joshua thank you for reading my poem and appreciating it.


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vocalcoach 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

...well, I know what kind of dreams I'm going to have tonight :) Rainbows and mad, passionate love it is! You, acaetnna, have created a lovely and sensual work of art. A most magnificent poem along with beautiful photos. You are a genuine diamond. Voted up and beautiful...just like you!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Vocalcoach thank you so much for your wonderful comments. You are so kind - may all your dreams come true.


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carrie450 5 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

This is a very beautiful and passionate poem acaetnna. I love your photos also.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am pleased you enjoyed this hub - thank you Carrie450.


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Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

Whoops, wish I was that brave, I have one really wild one, based on truth but I just don't know..I took it down pretty quick, sometimes words just come don't they, without really thinking. I really love it, maybe one day there will be a place for it. I love your poetry.

Polly


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Pollyannalana thank you so very much. I was checking out your website today - fantastic. I just loved the piece about Diana, the Queen of Hearts. A wonderful tribute to her, my absolute favourite TRUE royal. Brilliant.


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rishworld 5 years ago from Dreammie Kreatiw World..

Another beautiful one, in which intimacy is embellished with such beautiful words...

your man is really lucky to have you...your poems shows your love...

god bless you..


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Rishworld thank you so much for your very kind words.


JadedLove 5 years ago

Love is all of the colors blended together to form perfection. You paint them beautifully. up awesome and beautiful


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you JadedLove, I so appreciate your visit and comment.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

You are great with this style! Congrats to you!


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vocalcoach 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Hello dear acaetnna - This poem is so very beautiful and romantic, I had to come back and read it again. I have a question about the 2nd line. You wrote "aching" and I'm just wondering if you meant "arching." Please forgive me if I have intruded ... Hugs -= vocalcoach


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Vocalcoach you are awesome. Yes I made a mistake, I did mean arching and you are the only person to spot the mistake, or at least the only one brave enough to mention it! I am really grateful and have now corrected my mistake. Thank you. I appreciate your comment, after all that's what we are all here for surely, to improve our work. So thank you as always Vocalcoach.

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