Our Love is Unique

We'll trust in our love
We'll trust in our love
Love securely embedded in our hearts
Love securely embedded in our hearts
We are so in love
We are so in love
Like a flickering candle
Like a flickering candle
Trails of emotion
Trails of emotion
We kiss and caress
We kiss and caress

Our Love is Unique


Our love is like a snowflake

Totally unique

Embedded securely in our hearts

Whether we are near


Or simply far away

We are never apart

For our love is for always

Across the miles

Whispering a longing


Of complete togetherness

Awakened dreams of

Forgotten time

We breathe the same sweet air

Of borrowed time


Years are advancing

Yours and mine

Each moment together

We cannot resist


This sweet love of ours

With continued happiness

Oblivious of others

We kiss and caress

Talking for hours

Until deep in the night


Like a flickering candle

That will never extinguish

We'll trust in our love

This trail of emotion

Our love will forever be

Locked in our hearts




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Lovingu profile image

Lovingu 6 years ago from London

Wow, another truly awesome poem from you, you are clearly experiencing true love.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I love your comments, thank you Lovingu.


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epigramman 6 years ago

...yes you are our resident 'love doctor' ..... and another exquisite and lovely presentation of words and images .....you even managed to get the bitter and lonely epi-man (lol lol) to write the 'lovey-dovey' stuff which I would say (ahem) .... he's pretty good at - but it's all thanks to you for my new poetic lease on life - you have become quite an influence on me ......


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You are totally awesome Epigramman - thank you x


hubpageswriter 6 years ago

Awesome and beautiful. It's like a love epic. Beautiful poetry at its best.;)


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Nayothara 6 years ago

Love is beautiful, and have no words for me to explain how gorgeous it is.... When I read your poems, my heart fills with Love and Joy and with my personal memories.... You bring the Love to your readers... I want to see more of your poems...


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so pleased that you keep returning to read my poetry Hubpageswriter - thank you so much for your lovely comments too, I so appreciate you visiting.


Website Examiner 6 years ago

Nicely done. I admired the transitions, where one verse seemed to grip into the next. Technically accomplished, balanced as well.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you so much Nayothara for your wonderful comments. I am so pleased that my poem filled your heart with love and joy.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Website Examiner it is always a pleasure to receive comments from you - thank you SO much.


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Minnetonka Twin 6 years ago from Minnesota

Beautifully written and brings lovely images to the reader. Thanks for a great uplifting sonnet:)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Beautiful poetry as always. This is love that is trusting and open and has such an honesty too. Marvelous.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

Me loving the flavor of 'true love' in your hubs lately. Beautiful :)


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

Oh, i'm so happy i found you.This is so beautiful. Thank you.

Cheers


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Minnetonka Twin thank you so much.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Astra Nomik, thank you again. I guess when you truly experience such emotions it is easier to write about.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Blaise25 thank you so much for reading my poem and lovely comments. So appreciated.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Always Exploring, thank you so much. I am just popping over to read your new poem.


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Nellieanna 6 years ago from TEXAS

Lovely words expressing lovely sentiment. When one has the right mate, it is indeed awesome. I had mine for 28 joyous years. So live them to their fullest!


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

True love is unique, and that what this hub is about. I thoroughly love this. Love is like that candle and yup, we want it to stay lit forever. Very sensual and romantic. just gotta rate this up!


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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

Beautifully constructed acaetnna, many people attempt to describe those emotions and of course some manage to convey those feelings. Your poem would sit proudly with the best of them. Bravo!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

Great poem acaetnna... you have lot's of fans...


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Nellieanna I am so pleased that you had 28 joyous years, life is so special shared with the write person isn't it.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Cheeky Girl, awesome comments from you as always, thank you so much.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Attemptedhumour your comments are simply amazing and I am sure I don't fully deserve them. I am over to read your hubs in a moment.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Suburban Poet I love you stopping by, thank you.


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

I have a friend who said God is in happy so when I want to go to church I come over here....


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

That is a truly wonderful thing to say Suburban Poet, thank you so much for coming back again.


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AmyTaylor 6 years ago

Absolutly beautiful...I only wish everyone were lucky enough to experience that which you portray. you are so very luck and so great with words. you give those of us who havent found such a thing hope!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh never give up hope Amy, just smile and always see the best in everyone and I promise you that love will be magnetised towards you. Thank you for your very kind words.


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sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

You have written such lovely and lyrical lines of longing. The uniqueness of a snowflake and the eternal light of the flickering candle resonate with my sense of love and romance. Thank you for your poem.


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

So....beautiful, my friend. You are amazing to play from word by word into romantic poem. You are so different, from uniqueness of love made this so special. Rating Up.

Blessing and hugs,


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

It sounds as though you love love and romance too. I thank you very much for your heart felt comments Sligobay.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Prasetio30 it is always a joy to read your comments and I thank you for reading my poems.Thank you so much for rating it up too, so appreciated. Until the next time, take care.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

It's buttons up as usual! You have a lucky man!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Micky Dee, I am definitely the lucky one, he is all I have dreamed of.


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

You are the love goddess, love makes the world turn, love is forever, love is pure, love is mother nature, love is dancing in the rain, love is your best friend, love is sweet and tender kisses, love is your pet, love is your parents and siblings.

Love is eternal.....There is not enough paper to write about LOVE. You have it, hang on to it and cherish it. I love that you are in love, I can see you glowing from where I sit. Keep loving you are loved at the hubs. Hugs


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you so much Saddlerider, your comments are like a poem itself. I just love you coming to read my poetry, I learn so much from your comments. I really do think that we should always try to see the best in everyone and love them. This love I feel at the moment though gets better day after day. Hugs too.


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, that was lovely, I remember that sort of love well! lol great poem, cheers nell


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Neil Rose.


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

Hey, you are truly in love aren't 'ya? You are such a very unique poet and I love your poetry so much so that I never fail to drop by each time I log in to HP! Fascinating works! =)


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SilentReed 6 years ago from Philippines

An open heart see / beyond the poet's homage / the meaning of love... .But in this cynical and materialistic age we live in, we need the breathe of fresh air that your poems bring....pure and unadulterated


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I simply love you dropping by DjBryle and I adore your work too.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks SilentReed we just need to spread this word of love still further around this planet and beyond.


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

I want that kind of love too!

Lovely, acaetnna. Very lovely!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Ah thanks Freya, I am sure you will.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

I've never been more inspired to write more about love than now. Your poems are beautiful and inspiring! Write on cupid write on! Love and Peace :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I also love your hubs about love - they so inspire me to write even more.


tlmntim9 6 years ago

Another lovely poem. What romance!


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warm_whispers 6 years ago

whether across or through or within this candle

you are always a valentine


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ellacor 6 years ago

You are indeed the love goddess. You must experience this amazing love to be able to write about it this well. I love your style, so romantic.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem Timntim9, I so appreciate your visits.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Warm_whispers thank you for stopping by.


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Pamela99 6 years ago from United States

The poem is absolutely beautiful. It seemed to be written straight from your heart. I loved it.


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

Very nicely written romantic poetry, this will touch many hearts.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Pamela, yes I just trying to put my feelings into print.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you for reading my poem and commenting 2usday, I really do appreciate it.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

You constantly hit the right keys and have found a love that will last.I am so happy for you both.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Dream On, yes I hope this love will last forever, I think there is a very good reason it will!


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

Dont know how I missed this one! Another beauty from you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to see you here Secretmission, I appreciate your comments, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you for visiting my hub Mark and for your comments - much appreciated.


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richtwf 6 years ago

More loving thoughts to enrich our hearts with love. Keep spreading the word of love Lady A. As always beautiful words!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I will try to, thank you for your lovely words Richtwf.


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Apparantly there is a large group of heartfelt romantics here in the Hubpages Community, and I think most of them are following YOU! LOL Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep them coming...


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Us romantics must stick together and spread the word of love. Thank you Denise, so much.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

You have captured the beauty that the eyes can't see.Each time you share such wonderful feelings I can't wait to read. Your smile reaches far beyond the pages that you cover.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You are very kind Dream On, thank you for taking the time to

read this poem.


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lifewellspoken 5 years ago from Vancouver BC

This is a sweet poem and you my dear is what Snow white is where words are alive.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I appreciate your comments Lifewellspoken - thank you.


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damian0000 5 years ago from Belfast

Very wistful, soft and gentle --- a beautiful piece this Acaetnna, more of these please :-)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Damian0000.


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Winsome 5 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

"We breathe the same sweet air

Of borrowed time"

My favorite line. Lovely. =:)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Winsome, I always appreciate your comments.


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Secretmission 5 years ago from Sandwich

When I need to revitalise myself I come to your hubs.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Well thank you Secretmission, I hope that this hub did the trick for you.


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Darlene Sabella 5 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

Oh yes my dear friend, ain't love grand...You have the face of an angle, and write like an angle. Love is the only thing we really have, thank you for giving this to us, it comes in many sizes...and I love you peace darsk

rate up


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Love is grand Darski - it is one of the things in life that is totally free and completely precious. To give and to experience love is completely wonderful. Thanks for visiting Darski, I so appreciate your comment.


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Peaceful life 5 years ago from Las vegas

how sweet poem...lovely and adorable

Our love will forever be

Locked in our hearts

(this is nice)

keep writing beautiful poems...take care!!!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Peaceful Life - thank you. I do believe that once we have loved, truly loved, it will remain in our hearts forever.

You take care too.


Johnny Love 5 years ago

In love i find a purpose,

reasons to press on.

finding in the flames,

dreams to die for.

tasting life in a kiss,

making the most of it all.

no words to express the depth,

of what love truly is inside.

Found in water so pure,

as lovers make their way.

Becoming one with light,

under beautiful darker skies.

Sorry, kinda popped into my braincell

up and beautiful. Blessings to you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

My word Johnny you most certainly are a poet. Awesome comment - thank you so much.


Johnny Love 5 years ago

Pleasure is mine.


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Sorry I missed this; maybe I wasn't here yet. I am a meany when it comes to love usually, have to write about the hurting part but I like the loving part too. lol Great job.


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Jackie. The loving part is the greatest part!!!!

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