Our first time

My lovers eyes

We hooked; there I saw evolution from beginning to end. The dark ages to the new age. Where we dwell now.

I followed the time from his one temple to the other. Positive and negative space came together to meet in the middle. The place of zero. The place of new beginning.

It has no value. Cradling an open hole for our spirits to come and go. This place on his face was still.

He opened his eyes. I saw inside. That's where real time began..

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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Very romantic.. It's beautiful.


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gramarye 6 years ago from Adelaide - Australia

Very nice, short and sweet!


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tantrum 6 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

Real time is Eternity. Loved it ! thanks ! :)


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Sunshyne1975 6 years ago from California, US

I love it.


ralwus 6 years ago

'Cradling an open hole' say no more, that's reality and great prose. Woot!

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