Our Dream (poem)

Come fly

The sky

With me

And see

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A stream

A dream

Come to

Our view

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A star lit night

Too set moods right

Soft hearts await

To meet their fate

-

So why

Not try

To flee

To free

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That gleam

Our dream

Come true

Anew

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A moon lit light

To guide our flight

The world can wait

While we create

-

Creating dreams for you and I

Another windswept memory

Created on edges extreme

Where music of passion break through

-

Reply

To my

Soft plea

And see

-

The skies’ delight

Within our sight

-

Our dream

Supreme

For two

Who knew

-

It’s not too late

The rest can wait

Comments 17 comments

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very very beautiful..Enjoyed..


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

absolutely beautiful poem..

I am sharing on Facebook

Debbie


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

This poem is absolutely beautiful.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Lovely poem and a beautiful dream. Voted up.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This is lovely. I can dream and I can relate to this. Love the last lines -

It’s not too late

The rest can wait

I agree it's never too late when it's just right.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Beautiful and so alluring!! Voted up and beautiful


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picadilly 4 years ago from Schaumburg, IL

Erotic....I feel the secretcy of love each day. Thank you for sharing your emotions!


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Very nice work!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India

So crisp and lovely! Awesome work! Great to follow you!


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G-Ma Johnson 4 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

Great video...you remind me of "Romancing the Stone"...poem was good too...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks for sharing this very beautifully written poem !


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful full poem, Voted up and beautiful.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Beautifully said.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

thank you all. i'm glad you enjoy my work. i'm sorry i cannot leave better comments


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautiful poem and wonderful dream


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

I see the moon shimmering on the water. I suppose you would have to look in the opposite direction to see it from there.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

This is so totally breathtaking! Incredibly beautiful, I was actually singing it with a tune of my own, it just so amazing, it tries to escape away like a bird, free...

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