Out Of Sight (poem)

Foggy night

Thoughts alight

Out of sight

Out of sight


Truth takes flight

By some fright

Groundless plight

Mindless might


Far from light

Fears ignite

Out of sight

Out of sight


It’s alright

Hopes recite

To build mite


False delight

Finds a height

From mind’s blight

Out of sight


Holding tight

Doubt to smite

So contrite

Out of sight


Bitter bite

Fate rewrite


Terror’s rite


Flaccid fight

Brought respite

Out of sight

Out of sight

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Phyllis Doyle 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

I like this poem. It is very clear and flows nicely.

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anglnwu 3 years ago

The refrain adds a nice quality to the poem. Rated up.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

In the midst of dark and light a smooth expression

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Excellent, Martin. Your mind sees more than other people's eyes. It is a great gift.

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Another thinker. Great job, once again Martin!

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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Great work here Martin, I will vote this one up. Thank you.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Very clever. It must have taken a while to find all those rhymes. Enjoyed it.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh yes Martin another to be voted up.

Have a great weekend.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

This flows beautifully like a song, nicely done.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Clever and flows real nice.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Clever and flows real nice.

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ahorseback 3 years ago

Now here is a poem that rhymes mmmy friend , You put some work into this one !Awesome !.....Ed

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