POETRY- I NEVER GAVE UP

I have finally found my way


Through my trials and tribulations


I'm beginning to understand life


So called friends that have been shady


Where were you when I needed you


You were no where to be found


You provided me with no comfort


As I spent the nights sleeping on the ground


I am not seeking your pity


But yet you are forgiven


Some of us have to dance with death


Before we can begin living


I have walked through the fire


I have been to the bottom


Shaking so cold and hungry


I guess I was forgotten


I lost the only thing that I hold dear


My heart stopped beating that day


I have spent every second since


Pushing everyone away


Only God can judge me


Open my eyes so I see clear


I chased away my demons


I walk through the dark without any fear


I am stronger, I am wiser


I learned from mistakes I made


To get to this point in time


This very second, this minute, this day


Took believing in myself


Always help others when you can


We all fall at some point in time


We all need a helping hand


We are only given this moment


Even though we can't change the past


Don't take a single second for granted


We never know if it is our last




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Marlin 55 5 years ago from USA

Beautiful poem. It sounds like it came from some very deep and personal struggles.


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N.E. Wright 5 years ago from Bronx, NY

I read this poem out loud so I could feel the essence of it, and I did.

It is really beautiful.

Thank you for sharing it.

Take Care,

N.E.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Marlin, thank you so much. It truly did but it did make me stronger.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

N.E., thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate it very much.


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WannaB Writer 5 years ago from Templeton, CA

It's always apparent when poems come from deep inside. Yours do. Thank you for sharing them. May God keep you strong.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thanks again WannaB Writer. I am just now starting to use the gifts that God gave me. I know this is what he wants me to use, but I haven't figured out my path. I hope to write poetry books and lyrics for country music one day. That is my dream. Thanks and take care.


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carrie450 5 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

You are a talented writer thelyricwriter. I liked the poem, very powerful and beautiful.


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sonia05 5 years ago from india

amazing poem with a great message!! Thanks for sharing!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thanks again Carrie for stopping by and reading my poem. It means a lot to me.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Sonia, I appreciate it and you are welcome. Stop by anytime and take care.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

I played the Creed song as I read your poem. Wow! I got goose bumps from the raw openness and sharing of your struggles. So glad your doing well :-)


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Minnetonka, thanks so much. Music and lyrics are my passion and I thought this song fitted well with the poem. Thanks so much for pointing that out. You are very kind. Thanks for everything.


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pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

Very beautiful! Trials make us stronger. Experience wiser and living in the moment is the only way to experience what is. Your poem describes this journey well! Thank you!


SusieQ42 5 years ago

You're a great writer! This poem ranks #1 in my book. Funny how people tend to run the other way when someone needs help, huh?


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thank you so much for your comments Penny and Susie.


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Peggy W 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

Your last words sum this poem up nicely:

"Don't take a single second for granted

We never know if it is our last"

So true! Nice music to accompany this!


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izettl 5 years ago from The Great Northwest

This is a very heartfelt poem. I've been to a similar place/situation/feeling as what you've expressed here so this truly resonated with me. Well done. I don't usually like poetry and I love this, really. I love it because it made me feel something.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Izetti, your comment means a lot, so true because you can relate. It really is my passion to do this as a career and I hope one day I am blessed with that chance. I wish I could put my songs on here, but I have to do the copyright deal. Thanks so much. It was well worth hearing this. You made my day.


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Whidbeywriter 5 years ago from Oak Harbor on Whidbey Island, Washington

You are very talented and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.....blessings to you!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Whidbeywriter, thank you so much for coming over. I thank you for your time and comment. Same goes for me. See you soon.


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sherrylou57 5 years ago from Riverside

Thank you for sharing this with us.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Sherrylou, thank you so much for coming by to check it out. Best wishes.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A great poem with many lessons to learn. It is true that in whatever good position we find ourselves, we help others cos nobody knows tomorrow. You be blessed


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thanks Ubanichijioke. I thank you for your kind words my friend. You are so right.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Beautifully written and expressed , very heartwarming and im so glad you overcame :) I voted this piece all the way up across the board , except funny , because it is never funny to have troubles. have a blessed evening:)


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Hi again Jami. Thanks so much. Once you hit the bottom, you can only go up. I use lyrics from 50 cent, "death has to be easy cause life is hard". I always enjoy your comments Jami cause I know your work. Your poetry is amazing and your wording is incredible. Every poem I have read of yours has deep meaning. That is poetry at its best. Thanks for your time and vote Jami.


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qlcoach 5 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

Yes to healing, recovery, hope, faith, never giving up! Your poem is very inspirational. Sending you purple butterflies and blue Light. Peace....Gary.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Gary, thanks so much. I am glad we have found one another on the site. Your teachings are very wise and very beneficial. You articles on emotions, mood, ect really are helpful. I am off to read and learn more. Many thanks Gary:)

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