POETRY-LOSING SOMEONE CLOSE


I didn't get the chance


To tell you good-bye


These tears of deep surrender


I can no longer hide


No one can take your place


The way you taste, the smile on your face


The only fact that comes to mind


No way you can ever be replaced


This love we shared through all these years


Nothing else could ever compare


The way you held me through the night


Your fingers running through my hair


I really can't believe your gone


As I sit here and listen to our wedding song


Baby I am pacing all night long


When all is right it seems so wrong


Just promise me you'll visit


If only in my dreams


It would mean the world to me


To me you meant everything


As I lie awake here writing


This tender note to you


I'm finally able to realize


Everything that you do


For me, the kids, and your family


For friends, someone you just met


The kindness of your heart


We will never ever forget


To me you were the morning sun


The Earth, the moon, my star


Know you'll be missed and I love you


Wherever you are near or far


And even though I didn't tell you enough


Our hearts were built on trust


And even though sometimes were tough


Nothing could ever break our love


So goodnight to you my dear


For only tonight we now part


Til the end of my road, I'll see you soon


You always own .... the key to my heart.

20 GREAT COUNTRY LOVE SONGS

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WannaB Writer 5 years ago from Templeton, CA

This brought tears to my eyes. I'm sorry you had to go through this. I know I'd feel that way if anything happened to my husband. And I'm at the age now where I need to face the fact I could lose him any time. It's easy to take those we love for granted -- until they are gone.


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Touching and so sad. I'm so sorry for your loss but you did a beautiful job of conveying the emotion and longing you feel. I hope writing it helps you through the grief. God bless.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

WannaB Writer, thank you so much for your comment. I do appreciate your concern, but I didn't lose someone personally. I wrote this poem for a friend. I do this a lot to be honest to capture the moment. It is a gift that God gave me. I put myself in his shoes and my words feed off his every move. We all will experience pain like this at some point in time. Through my poetry, I would like to show how important life is and why it is important to never waiste one single moment. I appologize if I mislead you in anyway but my attentions were pure. I can appreciate the fact that you felt the power of the poem. For myself, it makes it worthwhile. Thank you and God Bless.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Poetic Fool, I am honored, as I do know you enjoy poetry as well. I did want to convey my friends every emotion as I watched him. It is hard doing that, but this piece is to offer people some sort of closure. For someone that didn't get to say "I love you" or "good-bye". I appreciate your concern, but I wish you can understand by reading the comment above. God Bless.


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

So beautiful and oh so sad. Up and beautiful and awesome too!


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WannaB Writer 5 years ago from Templeton, CA

lyricwriter, I have done the same thing myself. I've done my best writing inside someone else's head, so I understand. I can't write poetry anymore, since I'm no longer occupying the head of anyone else. it's hard enough to keep up with myself, LOL.


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem. I am glad to know this from you. Thanks for writing this and share with us. Cheers...


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Hey there Pop. Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate it very much. See you soon.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Writer, I feel your words. I believe having this talent is a very special gift. With this gift, we have sincere understanding. Thanks for the insight. Take care.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Prasetio, thank you so much. Thank you as well for stopping by to read it.


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billyaustindillon 5 years ago

Nicely written - reminded me of Tomorrow Wendy from Andy Preiboy - very moving work.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Billy, thanks for your comment. Thanks for the comparison as well. Have a good weekend Billy.


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi thelyricwriter, thanks for sharing this well written beautiful and touching poem !


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thank you Kash for the comment and thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. Take care my friend.


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carrie450 5 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

What a beautiful heartfelt poem thelyricwriter. I'm so sorry for your loss. God bless you.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

I am so choked up by your loving tribute. Thanks for sharing your beautiful heart and story with us :-) God Bless you


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Carrie, thank you so much for the comment. I actually wrote this for a friend that lost his loved one. I think you for your sincere opinion though. Thanks so much.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Minnetonka, thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your kind words.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

The pain of longing beams out of this poem. Voted up and beautiful.


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Peggy W 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

You definitely have a way with words and can instill deep meaning into your poetry. Glad to hear that this is not a personal loss...but many surely have felt the feelings you expressed in this poem. Rating this useful as a reminder to everyone not to take life for granted.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Martie, thank you for your vote. I sure do appreciate you taking the time to read it. Hope your evening is great. Best wishes.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Dear Peggy, thank you very much friend. That is the key. Do not sit idle by in life. Life is what we make it. Follow your dream always. Thanks for reading Peggy. It is of great value to me for your time. Hope all is well and talk to you soon.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

I love this poem. The diction, free flow of words, style and the meaning passed across. Thanks for sharing


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Joy56 5 years ago

I am so glad to read this was not your loss..... It of course should not be anyone's loss..... We should all appreciate what we have, we never know when it may taken away from us.... Love your writing style.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi thelyricwriter, you do indeed have a gift, this poem is both beautiful and sad and a wonderful tribute.

I was pleased to read that you didn't lose anyone personally.

Voting up and thank you for sharing.


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

I accidentally found you while hub hopping, and now I'm following you because you have that ability to hook the readers.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This is a beautiful poem and one I can relate to.

A lovely tribute


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Gypsy48 5 years ago

Very touching poem. Well done.


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Nicely expressed. Is this a poem you've put to music? I was trying to envision if it was what that tune would sound like. Thanks for sharing a sampling of your poetry.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them all very much. Denise, I haven't added music to this one just yet because I was trying to write an appropriate chorus. I thank you for asking though. I have been writting articles so much lately that I have put my music on the back burner.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them all very much. Denise, I haven't added music to this one just yet because I was trying to write an appropriate chorus. I thank you for asking though. I have been writing articles so much lately that I have put my music on the back burner.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Superb! I like the poem, sad and so sweet, very beautifully written. The poem has a nice flow all the way and I also like your expressions. Very well done my dear Friend, you are undoubtedly a very good writer and I shall definitely be reading your other hubs shortly.

Take care.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Kamalesh, thank you for the comment. I appreciate you pointing out the detail of the poem. You are a very good writer yourself and I look forward to your work also.


Multiman 5 years ago

Beautiful poem, I enjoyd its tenderness and deep thought. Voted up.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Multiman, thank you for stopping by and having a read. I thank you also for your time. Take care.


femmeflashpoint 5 years ago

Lyric - I'm not much for most poetry, however, this one is very touching.

A beautiful lacing of thought and feeling you've woven together here. :)


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Flashpoint, thank you for your touching comment. I appreciate it very much and glad you enjoyed it. It was inspired by the heart.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A very heartfelt poem. Sad and moving. Well written. So sorry for your sorrow. Bless you


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A very touching, sad and heartfelt poem. So sorry for your sorrow. A well written poem. Awesome and sad.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Larryvonncurtis, thank you for stopping by to read it friend. I appreciate your comment.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Ubanichijioke, thanks for your time and for reading. I appreciate your sincerity. I for one, am a fan of your poetry and work. Personally, when I write these poems, I write it for others so they may be able to be inspired, or in this case, so they can find some form of comfort or peace. Thanks for reading and take care friend.


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frogyfish 5 years ago from Central United States of America

Sorrow, heartfelt gratitude, love, hope. These all came through your beautiful words. I must read more...you touch the strings of my own poetic(?) heart. Thank you!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thanks you Frogyfish. I am much grateful for your comment.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

You have an awesomoe gift of expressing that true Love and sentiment of commitment that is very heartwarming , a true poet :) I voted up,awesome and beautiful , thanks for the read , i certainly do not visit you enough :) I loved this piece, have a blessed evening:)


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Hey there Jami. I appreciate your thoughtful comment Jami. I really do. Thanks so much. I have written such things since I was 7 years old. It always came naturally so I have to believe it is a talent I was born with. I have always enjoyed your work and I will continue to be a supporter for you Jami.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

you can never tell someone you love them enough. and sometimes we wait till its too late, don't wait til their gone to tell someone how you feel. don't realize what you have once their gone, realize it while they are still there.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Perfect wording Nikki. I told myself, this wouldn't be me. I will say what I need to say today as if it was my last night. I tell my wife and kids how much I love them everyday. Very well stated Nikki.


ThomasRydder 5 years ago

Good morning, LW my friend!! Let me tell you something. The is one suPERB poem if it was written by a man who had lost his wife. The fact that you wrote it for a FRIEND and am able to still capture the heartache and loneliness of his existence boggles my mind. Nikki is right...there's no such thing as too much or too soon. You, Sir, are the BOMB!!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Hey there Thomas. Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot. It is a great feeling when someone complements my poetry and lyrics. I appreciate it Thomas. See you soon and take care.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

beautiful and sad. Loved it! Voted up! BTw, have you had much like with poetry.com?


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Thanks PDX. I have experimented with it a few times, but not as much as I would like too. Seems like I never have any time to do so.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

write more poems...


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

i did a poem for poetry.com a decade ago, and then I had to pay to have it published. I kind of think they're a scam, and they don't get good reviews online. do a Google search :-)


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia Author

Oh yeah? I haven't messed with them that much, but that is bull you had to pay to have it published. Sounds like a scam to me also.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

ya. that's the problem with self publishing. All sorts of horror stories. Feeding on people's dreams and whatnot


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia Author

No doubt PDX. The business aspect can get nasty.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

doesn't it always?


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia Author

Yes it does.

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