Poem: Goodbye

When loving hatred still bleeds,

Pain memories knock,

‘til unconsciousness rocks.

Shatter images sucks,

‘til your heart was crashed.

Then when nothing’s left but goodbye...

Goodbye could be- a poisonous bile!

A bitter cry,

‘til it kills you with shedding lies.

Savoring the melting fire

Keeping you with a zombie sigh.


Goodbyes can even make an angel cry... if that goodbye means a lifetime crashing of our heart, it's really hard to go on but that's life! A little bit bitter, sometimes sour and tomorrow maybe salty. We can cry for a while but make sure to move on even if it is not the easiest thing to do. Always remember, life is also sweet...when all of these blend together, it could spice up life and you will never get bored...at least it's not tasteless right? :)..

We are lucky to be here so live to the fullest, appreciate even the smallest thing in your day to day activities and do not waste your time lamenting.

We still have the chance to make our life the best and mouthwatering so don't give up and always hope for the best taste ever!...cheer up!

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Joy56 6 years ago

i like the message this conveys, and your style of writing, so happy to have met you....

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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Hello ma'am Joy56! Your the first once who leave a comment, Thank you soo much!... I was thinking to make changes here but still don't have the drive to write...

I'm also glad to know you here at HP, ^.^..I'm looking forward to read more of your work..^.^

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Simply Jill 6 years ago

love it ! It's so true, we tend to take the simple blessings for granted when their is so much worth being grateful for. Life it truly to short!

Thank you , I enjoyed this :)

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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Hi Simply Jill, thank you very much for leaving a comment and for sharing your thoughts, yes I agree! ^.^

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Inspira78 5 years ago

that is what life are... agree with u pinkhawk...

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Claudia Tello 4 years ago from Mexico

Interesting topic to write a poem on; learning to say goodbye is a good way of keeping ourselves up and happily alive through the inevitable separations of life. Sometimes we just have to let go and be grateful for what we have lived.

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