PRAYER OF LOVE


Walking into street,

Someone stopped me,

Don’t know if the,

Eyes were magnet,

Or was a beautiful,

Gift to me.


The moment neither,

Thinking was possible,

Nor understanding,

Stood with me,


But now overcoming,

My shyness,

I announce loudly…

It was the love with thee…..


Stopping again and again,

Became a habit to me,


And my eyes,

To those eyes,

Looked every moment,

No, fear to get wrong,

Isolated in me,


Yes a fear of time ,

Was always there,

Of loosing in me.


But now, overcoming,

All my situations,

I announce loudly….

Love was pondering there by thee…..


This habit intoxicated,

A craze in me,


And the sky was,

Shadowing a blanket,

Hiding this scene beneath,


To what extent,

Could I tell?

What was happening?

In my heart bell,


That, which is overcoming,

Today before you,

You can understand the LOVE for thee…..


A try to know what love is,

A desire to have,

That love bliss,


That made me to fall,

Till last limit,

Nothing is now left,

Here to loose at it.


But today when my,

Each vein is intoxicated,

With it,

And my every breathe,

Has been affected,

By it,


I now claim that,

The love for thee……

Was a prayer of love,

What I did.

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ahorseback 5 years ago

Oh Oh , someones in Loooovvveee! Watch out now,....:-}


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

hahaha...

a horseback thanks

these are some very old memories made new in form of poem today...hope u enjoyed..


Tanmoy Acharya 5 years ago

I think magnets have 2 poles :)

Lovely thoughts and a nice ending.


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Ingenira 5 years ago

Such a lovely poem. Voted up and beautiful.


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makusr 5 years ago from India

moneycop,

Greetings from MAKUSR. You are a good poet the way you have gone through. A true devotee of Lord Krishna!

Lots of Love,

MAKUSR


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

TANMOY.......thanks...yeh..i havent thought of it..two poles..very fine thinking

ingenira.........thanks a lot

MAKUSR....thanks for comment and complement....trying to be his true one.


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

It's so wonderful to be in love and to be loved. Nice poem.


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

It's so wonderful to be in love and to be loved. Nice poem.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi moneycop, wow a wonderful love...


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks vinaya

thanks movie...


Sueswan 5 years ago

"But today when my,

Each vein is intoxicated,

With it,

And my every breathe,

Has been affected,

By it,"

What a beautiful toxication love is.


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Highvoltagewriter 5 years ago from Savannah GA.

Lovely...just as you are lovely!


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

awwwwww.. to be in love!!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

So good to be in love that you want to shout it from the roof tops. I was going to give you favourite verse but Sueswan beat me to it.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

sueswan...when i was writing this poem...and used this word...u was there in mind....yes i knew these lines will be liked by u..

thanks a lot...


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks high voltage....

nice to have your comment here...welcome...


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks mama...yeh

its very beautiful scene...when played

its very beautyfull feeling, when laid,

my hunger rose to that limit,

that i woke or sleep now like a maid....


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

rose marry...thanks for that competing feeling....my verses have made a heart touching attempt..thanks...

FOR U I HAVE ANOTHER VERSE...WROTE LAST NIGHT

That vision when made me sink,

I accepted to sink and started sinking,

Surprised when the vision disappeared,

I learnt the art of swimming

Now swim continues in LOVE ocean,

What's the fear of sinking now,

As already sinkun


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very lovely. The love shines in your poetry. Thank you....


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

always exploring...........thanks to u tooo.........always welcome


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Simply lovely!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

breakfastpop...thanks


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Love is Always Wonderful...whether it is Old or New...your Poem Moneycop, captures those Moments oh so well. I Love the Pictures you chose too.


"Quill Again" 5 years ago

Love from te heart flows fro these words...

Blessings and Hugs


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks...b milan..

those momenets are really the ebst memorable ones..

thanks quill

.....what ever comes as a flow i write...not every idea i write. only that which is benifitial to others i write.


september girl 5 years ago

Sounds like the 'love bug' has gone and bitten you. : ) Sweet poem!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Oh wow you knew I'd love this poem about love and I absolutely do. Awesome! Voting up and pressing all those buttons too!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks...acaetnna.......keep pressing.....would be motivative to carry on..


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

moneycop, you have won my admiration, look forward to many more great poems from you.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

and so u too...michel...thanks for comming by and reading my poems


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

You are very beautiful.!!!


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks michel


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

did you get my e mail? I want to wrie a poem for you

where is Jabalpur?


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful! Plainly said ain't love grand???


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks a lot rose...as ur name so u look also

love itself is GOD no doubt that we have our lovers here and we love then diehearted ly but when we realizer the real love then only we turn towards GOD

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