Paradise Times (poem)

Upon a night not long ago

We sat and watched a fire fair glow

While sharing moments we loved so

And lost ourselves amid the flow

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This time we spent in paradise

Where dreams were themes made to entice

For chances which would not come twice

And kisses cast were oh so nice

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Such moments made in times ago

Rich splendor stars we would entice

We’d fly away and not think twice

And live forever in time’s flow

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But fragile was this paradise

Whose magic luster was our glow

How is it we forgot it so

Were kisses cast that oh so nice

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And now we’re lost in strange new flow

That paradise we miss it so

And yet we live amid its glow

Upon a night not long ago

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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

Yes my good friend, the wonderful times that we share are kept in our memories and keep us warm when chill winds blow. Thanks for your shared memories. whonu


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, it seems your poems are about lost love or love lost. Are you living alone or feeling lonely?


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Beautiful work Martin, let the good times roll. And vote this one up.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

A beautiful memory of the paradise of love, and it is good to have such memories than nothing at all.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I miss my paradise of love, so very much.

Never really believed it would ever die.

You say it with elegance and charm.

I say it stinks!

DJ.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Memories are so wonderful..You brought some back almost forgotten..Thank you...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Romantically wonderful. Brought memories of another time and a fireplace.


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Full with memories .....loved the time here in this memorable paradise for sure. Shared and votes up ++++++++++++++++


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Paradise Times looks a dream but so romantic too


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Memories are sweet and should be cherished. Up and beautiful!


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Senoritaa 3 years ago

Very touching! Hope the paradise remains so.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Treasure the paradise for as long as it lasts...


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A beautiful poem with thoughts that so many can relate to. The joy of remembering times past.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Beautiful! Paradise times should never be lost. Cultivate those moments!


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

Nice memories my friend and don't we wish we could regain them, besides in our memories. whonu

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