Sensual Paradise

Erotic sensuality

Devours me

Rising up slowly

From the unknown

Creeping lowly

Never to be

A stitch unsewn

Basked in sunlight

A tropical zen

The sensuality of it's curves

Wraps you in

The blaze of the fire sun

Sizzles the drum

That strums my soul

From beginning to end

My passion is awakened like

An animal that was caged

Running into the freedom of wilderness

Releasing it's rage

My paradise has opened up to me

Showing me it's beauty

Like a rose blossoming

Uncovering it's many folds

In this moment a quiet silence comes

That overtakes me

Where things from the unknown had

Spun to take hold

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mathira 4 years ago from chennai

Wonderful paradise, carolinemd21.


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Beautiful paradise, I felt I was there. :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Always share that which you see and feel, it makes for the best gifts there are in and of everything . One needs to always speak that which he/she knows, knowledge is power. show me the one who refuses a share of such.

Great work Caroline.

Give thanks.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Caroline...this is amazing..you write the way I love..so glad I am following you..I voted up and beatiful and awesome....blessing to you dear friend..debbie


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, Paradise found...Enjoyed...


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Very nice provocative piece. The photo selection is amazing.

There is a typo in the last line.


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Beautiful poem Caroline.

LOL Ghaelach


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just wonderful. That picture made me feel like I was there.


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Silent hurricane 4 years ago from Israel

Beautifully amazing, breathtaking and just lovely. I felt as if I was there. Thank you for sharing.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Mathira thank you for reading and your comments!

@ JhonRude thank you for stopping by and reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)

@ Cheryl thank you I'm glad you liked it. :)

@ Sky thank you for your support and comments as always. :)

@ Hi Debbie thank you for the great compliment! I enjoy your work too!

@ Always thank you for stopping by. Always great to see you.

@ Mckbirdks thank you for the compliment and for coming by. Always good to see you. Thanks for the catch!

@ Ghaelach thank you for reading! Always good to see oyu!

@ Hi Gypsy! I am glad you liked it!

@ Silent hurricane I am glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by and reading!


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LChristiane 4 years ago from Florida

Great job, every word made me feel compelled to read more.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago

Beautiful.. passionate!!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ LChristiane thank you! I am glad you liked it!

@ Hi ShimmeringDawn thank you for reading and commenting. Always good to see you!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

WOW, you strike deep into my imagination

Powerful, only a woman can write like this.

Please, don't stop!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

A thread on your blanket, What I wouldn't give to be

to write such words as beautiful as these

Soft, Tender,Words When you lay down on me

Oh what a thrill, though it never will be

just to look into your mind, read your words

will have to be enough for me


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MisguidedGhost16 4 years ago from Queens, New York

this is wonderful. sweet, passionate, almost as though your words are seductive. im excited to read the rest of your work.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Caroline, I meant to comment on the picture..It is beautiful!!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Cleaner thank you for your little poem and for your compliments. I am glad you like my work.

@ Misguided thank you for reading and commenting! Glad to see you.

@ Thanks Always!


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epigramman 4 years ago

.....I tried to make a comment here two hours ago and I'm not sure if it went through or not - so I leave one again by saying that your writing here is sensuous art in a poetic paradise and this time I'm sending it to where it belongs on a marquee posting on my Facebook page with a direct link back here - lake erie time ontario canada 9:44pm


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Brilliant Caroline. Never knew sensuality like this before.


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Jaggedfrost 4 years ago

i loved the imagery and emotion behind your words. A couple things. Using like isnt really needed. Try to write without it and see what you think. You don't need to work so hard foor rhyme if it doesnt quite work for you. i Loved the picture that went with it. It would have been nice to have more reference to what got you so aroused.


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schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA

The beautiful picture adds so much to the words, very nice!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Epi thank you so much for reading and your kind words. Thanks for posting it too. You are awesome. Always good to see you!

@ Senoritaa Thank you for stopping by!

@ JaggedFrost Thanks for the advice and read. It wasn't about my arousal more how the paradise has a life of it's own. I was trying to describe it's own sensuality in a way.

@ Schoolgirlforreal thank you for reading and your comment!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, You sure don't need no advice from anyone!!!! to tell you how to write poetry.

Please Frosty, you are not supposed to give advice to someone who writes like this. Next time, don't insult, just enjoy.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, could I use your new picture in a poetry hub?

Please !!!!!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Cleaner you're too funny.


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Squeesh 4 years ago from United States

Love this! thanks for sharing! :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Squeesh :)


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

So beautiful and thank you for sharing.

Eddy.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Eiddwen :)

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