Platonic Love

Platonic Love

April Poetry Month 2012

Poem 6


You share with me

Your greatest gift

Your light and laughter

I am radiant

And must return to you

This magic

*

You are the most special

Of all who have touched my life

Gifted and giving

Unsparingly kind

Throbbing with the fever

Of being

*

You are all that is good

You have heard the music

Of my heart

And the murmur of my spirit

Heard them both

And made of yourself

A hymn of celebration

© Ann Davis-Adele Haverty 2004

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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

This is such a tender write! I loved the last stanza!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Such a lovely poem. Great picture and such a sweet picture to go with the hub.


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Nicely woven. Innocent and refreshing.


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andsoforth 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Like Audrey, I like the last stanza...especially, "music of my heart and murmur of my spirit". Thank you.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderfully warm poem, voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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TENKAY 4 years ago from Philippines

A good tribute to all best friends... I got one, am so lucky indeed!

Voted up and beautiful too.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

the radience emanates from the faces I see, very nice to have feelings of love.thanks for sharing.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

teaches, such a wonderful thing to have a close buddy.

mckbird, nice comment thank you

andsoforth, lovely comment, thanks

writer, your comments are always good, I love them

TENKAY, I have been so lucky to have a few. Yes you are lucky indeed

cleaner3, you are certainly qualified to spot love. Thanks for the visit.

I apologize for answering these all together, but the reply function was not working today. Sorry.


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ananceleste 4 years ago from California

Is indeed a celebration of love and friendship. Few can relate to those heartfelt words. Bellisimo!


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Ann

"You have heard the music

Of my heart

And the murmur of my spirit"

This one is filled with love and magic. Simply lovely.

Voted up and away!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...pure - rich - sincere words and it doesen't get any better than this - you have moved me with your poetic perfection here - so simple yet so profound.

lake erie time 11:45am and sending you warm wishes and good energy


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m0rd0r 4 years ago from Sofia, Bulgaria

Very good poem.

Good luck on your challenge Ann :) Voted up.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

MMordor, I'm hanging in there...taint easy.

Epi, thank you for the visit.

Sueswan, enjoyed your comment and thanks for the votes.

anan, lovely to see you, and thank you for the comment.

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