Further into the slide of doom

my thoughts linger with the fog

of the morning tide -

I think I made you up

as I shut my eyes and let the

flashes of light dance freely.

I fancied the fog to reappear

to hover over my lost heart

wondering if the sun would ever return

I wonder if I was dreaming

or were you already there?

Did I forget your name as

the haze crawl’s across my eyes

Then I blink and see the night sun

gazing at me as I try to focus on the

lingering mist -

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alternate poet 6 years ago

very foggy ! welcome to hubpages and bring more poetry :)

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Heart Felt Book 6 years ago from New York, NY

great hub!!!love the poem keep hubbing...thanks for sharing

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Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

A brilliant poem, thank you so much for sharing.

I can see that you are relativly new so welcome aboard. I hope that you will continue to write and share your hubs with us all on here.

take care.

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MarionAnn 6 years ago from Vancouver Island, BC Author

Thank you for your support. I've written many poems and now it is time to share them~

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