Poem: We Have Become One Soul

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Dedicated to Dev Bhaiya and Divya Bhabhi, With Lots of Love.


Tonight, my Love, we’ll sip the spark,

With the rhythm of our Heartbeats,

Floating on the magnetic waves of bliss;

On the topaz edifice of silence,

Enrapturing the inferno racing through our veins...

So come closer…


Touch, feel the ambrosial epistle of my verve;

The wafted muse of a bard’s poem may ignite,

Pulling the Heart’s chords,

Thus giving birth to a melodious song –

A song of yearning… of passion… of Love!

So come closer… more…


Let us drape ourselves in nature’s canopy

Where the silken aroma of mist

Pleasantly passes through our pores, and

We lie entwined, like two spirits,

Rustling forever in the ethereal sky…

So come closer… more… a bit more…


O sweet Lover! Be not afraid of the tiny shooting stars

That’s performing a ballet in our celebration;

Shh… listen to the soft lullaby serenade

As our love-soaked breaths uncontrollably

Transform into enticing kisses…

Ah! How we have become one Soul… one Soul!


~ Copyright © Surabhi Kaura 2016


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manatita44 10 months ago from london

A total masterpiece! And I thought that you were tired. Does't show in this poem! Awesome! Brilliant and captivating in its artistry and vision. Full of invitation and longing:

"O sweet Lover! Be not afraid of the tiny shooting stars

That’s performing a ballet in our celebration;

Shh… listen to the soft lullaby serenade

As our love-soaked breaths uncontrollably

Transforms into enticing kisses…

Ah! How we have become one Soul… one Soul!" -Surabhi.

Romantic images of a very sublime height; an epitome of beauty and a paragon of delight is your Poetry: "Best words in their best order."-Colleridge.

You've entered the Palace of the selected few who use such powerful images! How divinely proud of you I am! Continue, continue! ...

Shivaya Om!


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Jodah 10 months ago from Queensland Australia

Wow! Surabhi.....this was not just romantic, but very sensual. A delight to read :)


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RJ Schwartz 10 months ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

Absolutely lovely piece, I so enjoyed the dynamic depth of your word use - quite powerful and leaves the reader light headed and wanting more.


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Surabhi Kaura 10 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Manatita,

I commend you for your insightful feedback. It’s indeed a pleasure to know from a great poet like you, who weaves words with brilliance and eloquence. Much appreciations. Om Shanti.

Jodah,

Sweet friend, I am glad that you like it. You know, I wrote this in the mid of night at around 2’o clock or something. This poem conveys a bit of romantic oomph. Ha ha. All in good faith. Art is art.

Ralph,

Thank you… thank you! I appreciate your kind sentiment here. Much Joy and Peace.


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shprd74 10 months ago from Bangalore

Kya baat. Surabhi.

Very sensual poetry. Awesome! !!

Music descending,

Hearts transcending.

Slow and steady,

Following Ecstacy.

- hari


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swalia 10 months ago

A sensuous poem but presented so aesthetically! I loved it.


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Missy Smith 10 months ago from Florida

I agree with everyone else who's commented Surabhi, this is very sensual. I like the very part that Manatita has highlighted above. Very nice!!


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Venkatachari M 10 months ago from Hyderabad, India

Very beautiful and sensuous poem and the music video is also much appealing.


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Surabhi Kaura 10 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Hari Bhai, Shaloo, Missy, Venkatachari ji - I sincerely thank each and every one of you. Sorry, too tired to reply to each. Your kind sentiments are truly noted and appreciated. You are all loving. God bless you all. Peace.


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AliciaC 10 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

I love the beautiful and enticing imagery! This poem is definitely sensual.


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word55 10 months ago from Chicago

Very captivating Surabhi, sensuality and excellent expressions with nature's embellishments of a romantic showdown . I gotta go get a fan, I loved it!


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Surabhi Kaura 10 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Hi Linda,

Thank you for dropping by, my dear. I truly appreciate your kind sentiment here.

Al,

Ha ha! I know... I know. Perhaps one should get some ice... fan wouldn't work. Lol! Thank you very much.


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Ashish Dadgaa 4 months ago from India

Simply Amazing way you choose symbolic things to convey your love to beloved in these lines. I Really feel the love the devotion of a lover towards beloved .


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Surabhi Kaura 4 months ago from Toronto, Canada Author

Wow! What a comment, Ashish. Thank you... thank you. Om Shanti.

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