Poem: Should I Say I Love You?

A short Poem about realising you've fallen in love, but feeling unsure whether to say so... It's not an uncommon dating situation to be in!

Last night, with you

Swept my doubts away

I feel like spilling

What I have to say

So thoughts buzz inside me

To find the right words

To speak how I feel

To let it be heard

And I want to call you

To let you know

I feel almost compelled

But I let it go

There's so many reasons

But do you want to know?

Should I keep it in?

Do I let it show?

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Author: StricktlyDating

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stricktlydating 4 years ago from Australia Author

So great of you to comment htodd and thankyou very kindly!


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htodd 4 years ago from United States

Wow ....Nice poem..Thanks a lot


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stricktlydating 5 years ago from Australia Author

Thanks Vanmdee! I don't think we're the only ones who've been in that situation! I appreciate your feedback! Best wishes.


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vanmdee 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

GREAT POEM!!!! I have been there, I have held it in, and he said it first....Truly love this poem!


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stricktlydating 5 years ago from Australia Author

Thankyou abradford55, Nice to hear you enjoyed it!


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

that was beautiful poem I enjoyed it.


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia Author

Thanks acaetnna!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

That was a super poem Stricktly dating. Loved it.


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia Author

Yes your right, and you put it beautifully!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

I think it adds some dignity to your feelings and it's not just hanging out there like "I love you" which then is asking for something in return. It's telling them that you are there for them and you are not there to fish it out of them....


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia Author

Wow! That's awsome! Thanks!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

It takes courage but maybe you could say it like this:

"No matter what happens, I just want you to know when you look back on this time that you know I was in love with you..."


alesha 6 years ago

i feel the same way about my boyfriende i love him but i cant tell him to his face

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