Poem: Walk with me

Walk with me



Will you walk with me

The night isn’t over

I want to know

That you’ll stay closer


The stars don’t shine

As the clouds hang lower

I feel all alone

As fireflies glower


The freezing wind

It chills my skin

My heart does ache

I feel colder within


As the darkness creeps

It may hide the sins

Of the treacherous path

As my journey begins


My shoulder waits

For a gentle hand

As I am moving through

This perilous land


Want to feel the warmth

Of you walking close

I want to hear you breathe

The rustle of clothes


When I feel you near

My courage glows

A bubbling stream

Of hope that flows


There’s a promise of dawn

In the distant sky

Tell me it’s true

Not an empty lie


Will you walk with me

The night isn’t over

I want to know

That you’ll stay closer


-Mohan Kumar-

© 2011 Mohan Kumar

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No_Clue 5 years ago

I enjoyed this poem...my favorite verse: "My shoulder waits

For a gentle hand As I am moving through This perilous land"


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alternate poet 5 years ago

nicely done.


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

I miss having someone to walk with, very touching


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richtwf 5 years ago

A wonderful poem my friend.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

@No_Clue, glad you enjoyed my poem. Appreciate your visit!

@alternate poet, Thank you, fellow wordsmith!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

@Fossillady, aww I am sure there is someone you there to walk with and go fossil hunting together :-) thanks for your visit!

@rich, thanks my friend.


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Laura du Toit 5 years ago from South Africa

Hope you enjoy many long walks with your loved one! Loved your poem!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast

I enjoy many walks with my loved one. I will remember your poem, beautiful till the end.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks Laura and Rhonda, much appreciate your comments. May you enjoy many walks with your loved ones!


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Shalini Kagal 5 years ago from India

So poignant - the promise of dawn - will it come, or not? Very evocative!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks Shalini. I think it will come, it always does.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Very nice!


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sonia05 5 years ago from india

beautiful choice of words!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thank you sonia05. Your comments warm my heart.


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Santi Lio 5 years ago from erehwon

Great poem. Reminds me of the night I left for university. My girlfriend and I spent the entire night talking about our future. I hadn't even properly packed, yet all I concerned myself with was our relationship. Thanks for taking me down memory lane.

Santi,


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Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Docmo, I could feel the cold and your hopeful yet tentative emotion in this walk. Beautifully expressive and evocative. You got it!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

@santi Lio sad to hear your walk but somehow there is solace in nostalgia and taking the walk again through someone else's words. IT shows there are others who share the same pain.

@Amy - I ma glad I got it. I've taken this walk and in some sense I feel I am taking this walk and hoping to be listened to.


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

You are so exceptional. I love the combo pics/verse.

So pleasant/refreshing/captivating!!! Did you read my

Hide and Seek yet. :-)


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epigramman 5 years ago

.....I'd walk with you .. until the last page here at Hubpages - because you inspire me and push me forward to new heights - and because you are a master at putting words together so effortlessly and so well - hubawesome - new word from the epi-man - special for this occasion!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

So filled with hope--lovely!!


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

No one likes to walk alone. Your poetic gift shines here as the words are so gentle and sweet. Thank you Docmo.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Thank you for sharing this great song. Jamie


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Doc, I would walk with you, but I'm afraid my chaperon won't let me out after dark. :) Beautiful poetry, lovely imagery, and a mental tease. :)


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Daisy Mariposa 4 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan (Docmo),

Your beautiful words, your imagery ensure that you will never walk alone.

Even if unseen, you will never be alone.


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Luna Blue 11 months ago

"There's a promise of dawn/In the distant sky/Tell me it's true/Not an empty lie"

My favourite part...nicely written. new to HP and enjoying discovering talent such as yours :)

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