Poem - Dancing Leaves

dancing leaves in a grand waltz wind

little vortices of symmetry

sway my way

as I escape the mundane world

along an October path of yellows and browns

I am lost in the hypnotic swirl of colour

the green of the leaf sacrificed
to the march of autumn gold

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it's a short poem chaps, what much more can I do about that and I see I have lost comments that were previously made on this hub. :-(



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tnderhrt23 7 years ago

I love this poem, "Dancing Leaves"! An arm-chair journey of escape from the "mundane world"...great hub!


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Drax 7 years ago from NYC.... Author

Hi tnderhrt23 thanks very much, it is great that you liked this little poem... Regards Drax


lyricsingray 7 years ago

I absolutely loved this and I thank you, Kimberly


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Taylor Finch 7 years ago from United Kingdom

It's a beautiful poem.


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Drax 7 years ago from NYC.... Author

@ Kimberly... thanks a lot


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Drax 7 years ago from NYC.... Author

@ Taylor... thank you :-)


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Coolmon2009 7 years ago from Texas, USA

enjoyed reading this hub - beautiful poem


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GABixler 7 years ago

Drax...I live amongst 13 acres of woods...I can only add that when those leaves dance, my cats are wonderfully fun to watch...and it makes me happy...great memories you've brought!

Glenda


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donna bamford 7 years ago from Canada

I enjoyed this too. now we have dancing snow an temperatures at minus 30 delsius celsisus I have no doubt.

I was hoping to write a peice first snowfall but now we have deep freeze. Merry Chrismas. Oh to be in ireland!


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grillrepair 7 years ago from florida

thank you.


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

To All... thank you very much for the nice comments...


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tantrum 6 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

I loved this poem, drax. Beautiful ! :)


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

Hey Tantrum... thanks :-)


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Kavita Trivedi 6 years ago from London

"I am lost in the hypnotic swirl of colour

the green of the leaf sacrificed

to the march of autumn gold"

Such beautiful lines and vivid imagery


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

Oh Kavita, thank you for the lovely comment...


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Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

Fluid with motion and imagery -- it has brought me right back to hiking in the mountains this past fall. Brilliant!


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

thanks very much for the comment Beth... I can still this in my minds eye, sometimes within the words is a scene that one can come back to :-)


sophs 6 years ago

Very beautiful poem, I enjoyed this! :-)


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GooGooGal09 6 years ago from Waco, Texas

Very nice poem, thank you for sharing!

-Tamara


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

@ Sophs... thanks very much for the comment...


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

@ GooGooGal... thanks very much for saying so...


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mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

ummm...

:)


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

@ MB... thanks for the comment...


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida

Lovely, thanks - being bereft of the glory of fall (here in Florida) I am grateful for your experience, thanks for sharing!


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Drax 6 years ago from NYC.... Author

thanks brightforyou... a lovely thing to watch and see The Fall...


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starflakes 6 years ago from Florida

magnificent a brilliantly said

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