Poems and Poetry: The First

The First

I want to be the first to bring you to ecstasy

The first to take you to heights you’ve only

Read in romantic novels or dreamt about

The first to turn you inside out

I want to be the first to put spring in your step

I want to be the first to light you up

I want to be the first to take you around the world

I want to be the first to wipe your tears in

The time of grief

I want to be the first to be by your side

Whenever you need support.

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Capedium 4 years ago from Texas.

With all this hubs we read..

First love and heart break...

How will you find that girl to be her first.. lol!!

Nice piece..


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tonymodus 4 years ago Author

I might not necessarily be the first lover but I will be the first to give her all the enumerated conditions listed in the poem. Thanks for acknowledging it is a nice piece.


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Sweet poem. Voted up.


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BakerRambles 4 years ago from Baltimore, MD

I really enjoyed this, it was moving to the heart.


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tonymodus 4 years ago Author

Thanks for enjoying my poem. Stay with my hub page for more.

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