Poetic License(A Haiku)


Poetic license,

for some, it should be revoked.

not in jest, or joked.


Quality lacking,

with no legitimate backing,

or alcohol soaked.


Never the less, grand,

as by each writer's own hand,

Its intent is stoked.



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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Whonu, you're a trip! You're right, not everyone can pull off poetry! You can, tho. :-)


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend, and may our Lord bless you on this fine day. whonu


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

I'll admit, I didn't see the cleverness here right off. Congratulations


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend. Glad you stopped by. whonu


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very interesting and clever poem!

God bless, Faith Reaper


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend and stop by again. whonu


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

You sure said that well! Poetry is not meant for everyone.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend. Yep, it's kind of like getting a driver's license..you have to practice along the way. whonu


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

whonunuwho.. you are an artist disguised as an ordinary writer. Your hubs vary and to me that shows you are not afraid to explore the far reaching boundries of the poetic words that are within your soul .. wow. your words express deep feelings throughout your work .

I will be back for more .. INSPIRING.!

MICHAEL


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thank you Michael, so glad you stopped by for a cup of coffee. whonu


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Hahaha! Well, now, there's a poet with a clear opinion!


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Oh can tell you how much I loved this!!! Loved this!!!


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rebeccamealey 3 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Cool haiku. Shows deep, deep thought.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend and come by again for a cup of coffee. whonu

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