Poetic Riot

Our tongues

twist

in a poetic riot.

Our breath

a breeze

on the sea.

Lips

gently tell

a lullaby,

the moment is passionate.

Lost for words,

trying

to just breathe.

Soaking

in the brightness

of a soul

that is broken too.

Emotions

sweep over me.

Pain

scarred in memories.

Whispers in the night,

not knowing

if your words are true.

Drowning

in my own fear.

Unable

to distinguish

love from lust.

Falling madly ,

gently into your arms.

Twisting

my life

with

a pentacle of trust.

The moment

is blissful

as if

i had never shed a tear.

Your eyes

captivate

my emotions.

Gazing

upon the beauty

words cannot define.

In this moment

all time

ceases

and my heart

is set aflame.

No matter what

fate has for us,

in my heart

your soul will always shine.

Zayleen Pain 2011 to my sid first poem written after a 3 year writers block

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Zayleen Pain 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

dont see how this is funny but okay at least its something :)


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

You know this is well written, yeah the one who rated this as funny was just a drunken jackass, f!@#'em, lol...


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Zayleen Pain 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

thank you so much...my writing is from my heart and soul and experiences so its not humorous...thanx for making me smile today!!


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

Glad to oblige...

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