Poetic Whispers

In the dark night

I feel things that

Are unseen

Quiet at first

They come to me

Then louder and louder

Speaking to me

My muses come

Sing to me

They know they are

Born happy and free

I feel their

Gentle whispers

In my ear

Poetic awakenings

Seeing things clearly

They wake me up

From this dreary existence

Where all seems the same

They bring me to life

Where I can breathe again


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always exploring 11 months ago from Southern Illinois

This is beautiful Caroline. What would we do without our muse's?


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Frank Atanacio 11 months ago from Shelton

wow, this was very well done..poetic charm..awesome


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carolinemd21 11 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

I don't know Ruby. LOL. Thank you for stopping by. :)

Thank you Frank for taking the time and stopping by. :)


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Ericdierker 11 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Sweetness is life. Thank you for this take away poem.


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Jodah 11 months ago from Queensland Australia

I am surprised I keep being introduced to wonderful poets I have not encountered before here at HubPages. This is a beautiful and well written poem Caroline.


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carolinemd21 11 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hello Eric, thank you for your kind words and stopping by. :)

Hello Jodah thank you so much. It's nice to meet you. :)


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manatita44 11 months ago from london

Diligent muses' you have my dear. Nice poem.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 11 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Just lovely. Your muses have brought you much inspiration.


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carolinemd21 11 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Manatita for your kind words. :)

Thank you Gypsy for the kind words. :)

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