Writing with no ending

Behind the bluest eye's often lies
the most personal misery
Like so many unwritten journals
such unwritten history

Where will I begin but to admit my
tenderness was vengeance
Thrusts of the sword deeper deeper
anger of transcendence

Better now with matters of the
mind in fluctuation
Or just a train in reverse a chemical
resuscitation

Who knows but the bastard how difficult
the man can be
Looking in the mirror for answers
he's longing to be free

Help ...help is the broken man in there
should I ever say aloud
And do only men ask for assistance
in the silent voice of the proud


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Very insightful self-reflective hub my creative friend.

Some truth to the eyes being the window to the soul.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

great write my friend.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

What a great poem! Awesome in its depth and so creative.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Beckie right ?, Thank you dear , yes there is huh, that window to the soul can be so open or closed . Happy Turkey day !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thanks cleaner ! Preciate that !


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thank you Bloosom , You're so kind !


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Powerful write! We all see many reflections when we look into the mirror. Loved it....


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thank you Always ! Yes so true !


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Emotional and heartfelt.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy thank you my dear friend .


dreamseeker2 4 years ago

Profound words of apparent insight and wisdom. Voted this one up and awesome. : )


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thank you Dreamseeker , I appreciate that !

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