Poetry: You Look As Radiant As A Star


Love you of course I do.

You look as radiant as the stars.

You evidenced a vivacious

Charm and caring thoughtfulness

That has evoked my fondness.

Your worse faults are only like

Keen condiments in my choice dish.

When I’m with you I felt as if a

Bolt of invisible, white-hot lightening

Had struck me.

My mind exploded in a shower of

Golden light I saw my body expand

And become a billion of starry particles

Along with yours;

Then I felt them combine and become one

An anchoring, breathtaking sense of unity

With you.

With you I feel like an infant in the hands

Of a capable mother.


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